for The Four Seasons7/13/2009 c5 gonefornow
This is a very cute story. Cant wait to see how things progress between the two. I've always liked nature myself so this story is perfect. Keep writing!
This is a very cute story. Cant wait to see how things progress between the two. I've always liked nature myself so this story is perfect. Keep writing!
7/4/2009 c1 Silverglade
I think you captured the mother's character really well in a situation like that. In the second to last sentence, it should say, "You are not normal", not 'your' normal. I like how the girl has some emotional connection with the flower, which would be great if you expanded on that.
Sincerely,
Silverglade
I think you captured the mother's character really well in a situation like that. In the second to last sentence, it should say, "You are not normal", not 'your' normal. I like how the girl has some emotional connection with the flower, which would be great if you expanded on that.
Sincerely,
Silverglade