for Battle Scars1/11/2015 c1 Aditi
Hey, did u change this story. I read it before and I thought it had a second part?
Hey, did u change this story. I read it before and I thought it had a second part?
1/2/2015 c1 Sonata
Well done. Various grammatical and spelling errors, but those can be ignored. Amy's voice was very similar to Tucker's, and I don't know whether that was intentional or not, but I believe they should be differentiated more. Nevertheless, a wonderfully written piece, and I hope to see more. (o u o )
Well done. Various grammatical and spelling errors, but those can be ignored. Amy's voice was very similar to Tucker's, and I don't know whether that was intentional or not, but I believe they should be differentiated more. Nevertheless, a wonderfully written piece, and I hope to see more. (o u o )
12/15/2014 c1 Guest
Awesome story i absolutely love it. Write more pls?
Awesome story i absolutely love it. Write more pls?
11/3/2014 c1 FANtastic
This is really good. Luv everything about it, especially that part where Tucker shuts the door on Tristan's face.
This is really good. Luv everything about it, especially that part where Tucker shuts the door on Tristan's face.
9/24/2014 c1 
2rusty-reader998
thats one hell of a one shot but a tad bit of cliche works okay so no problem ;p
2rusty-reader998thats one hell of a one shot but a tad bit of cliche works okay so no problem ;p
6/11/2014 c1 5Ishotthealbatross
This story is incredibly beautiful and makes me tear up a little each time I read it. And yes, I've read it lots of times :-)
5IshotthealbatrossThis story is incredibly beautiful and makes me tear up a little each time I read it. And yes, I've read it lots of times :-)
3/30/2014 c1 1brewings
Adore...awww thier love is just amazing.. eeeeeppp i want a boyfriend like tucker...haha
1brewingsAdore...awww thier love is just amazing.. eeeeeppp i want a boyfriend like tucker...haha
3/1/2014 c1 more-than-inactive
That was impressive and I loved it! It's just the short and sweet reprieve we need sometimes 3
That was impressive and I loved it! It's just the short and sweet reprieve we need sometimes 3
1/20/2014 c1 10A Different Kind of Yellow
Well, I don't think I've heard of that game before but if I had ever been stuck with my crush like that well... good on Amy for being herself!
10A Different Kind of YellowWell, I don't think I've heard of that game before but if I had ever been stuck with my crush like that well... good on Amy for being herself!
1/11/2014 c1 1rainreverie
this one shot is unlike any story that I've ever read. There are a lot of interesting things like... a dating party? super clever. never heard of that kind of thing before! But the whole concept with the scars was genius!
Anyways, I really really liked this story!
1rainreveriethis one shot is unlike any story that I've ever read. There are a lot of interesting things like... a dating party? super clever. never heard of that kind of thing before! But the whole concept with the scars was genius!
Anyways, I really really liked this story!
12/21/2013 c1 Parker. Lily Parker
This was just... I can't even. I don't know what to say (but when has that ever stopped me :P) because this is just so freaking amazing. Tucker was just the cutest little shit (is it weird that he reminded me of Loki a little bit?) and all I wanted to do throughout the whole thing was just give him a gigantic hug while screaming "I'LL LOVE YOU FOREVER". However as awesome as Tucker was it was your portrayal of Amy that I really loved. She's just so non typical. I feel like a lot of authors make the bad boy fall in love with the 'not your average girl' who really is just normal. But Amy was actually different. The fact that she didn't automatically fall for the perceived prince, took off her makeup, wasn't super conscious of her body, didn't try to make the guy sleep on the floor because she's a girl and most importantly she didn't just start liking Tucker because he's the bad guy but because she's 'known' him for a while. Not only are you characters amazing though, your writing is amazing too. You have the right amount of details, jokes and plot movement to make this one shot really really really good in such a small amount of words, and for that you should be applauded.
Lol. As you can see I have a shit ton to say because you are just amazing. Sorry for all the blabber but not sorry for loving your story so much :P. Thanks for sharing with us :)
This was just... I can't even. I don't know what to say (but when has that ever stopped me :P) because this is just so freaking amazing. Tucker was just the cutest little shit (is it weird that he reminded me of Loki a little bit?) and all I wanted to do throughout the whole thing was just give him a gigantic hug while screaming "I'LL LOVE YOU FOREVER". However as awesome as Tucker was it was your portrayal of Amy that I really loved. She's just so non typical. I feel like a lot of authors make the bad boy fall in love with the 'not your average girl' who really is just normal. But Amy was actually different. The fact that she didn't automatically fall for the perceived prince, took off her makeup, wasn't super conscious of her body, didn't try to make the guy sleep on the floor because she's a girl and most importantly she didn't just start liking Tucker because he's the bad guy but because she's 'known' him for a while. Not only are you characters amazing though, your writing is amazing too. You have the right amount of details, jokes and plot movement to make this one shot really really really good in such a small amount of words, and for that you should be applauded.
Lol. As you can see I have a shit ton to say because you are just amazing. Sorry for all the blabber but not sorry for loving your story so much :P. Thanks for sharing with us :)