for Battle Scars10/26/2013 c1 Fatima
This was the best story I ever saw
This was the best story I ever saw
7/18/2013 c1 displacedfemale
This was a cute little read. I think you did a good job of developing their relationship at a reasonable pace, having them retain their integrity and not just jump each other because the chance was there. Doing that in a one shot is quite difficult so well done
This was a cute little read. I think you did a good job of developing their relationship at a reasonable pace, having them retain their integrity and not just jump each other because the chance was there. Doing that in a one shot is quite difficult so well done
3/30/2013 c1 
17Minkaos
I really liked it. It was heartfelt, cute and adorable. I'm glad that Tucker and Amy ended up together.
17MinkaosI really liked it. It was heartfelt, cute and adorable. I'm glad that Tucker and Amy ended up together.
2/2/2013 c1 color outside the lines
Awww! :) Tucker is adorable! Tristan's a ego-inflated jerk and Amy is amazing! I loved how you began the story! You had my attention from the first line. Tucker and Amy's relationship is so cute! It's stories like this that make me want a boyfriend! The whole idea of being locked in a room with someone was amazing! The flow of the story was wonderful and you barely noticed how long it was. By the end your like, "Man, that was short." But then you realize just how long it was! I really enjoyed this. :)
Awww! :) Tucker is adorable! Tristan's a ego-inflated jerk and Amy is amazing! I loved how you began the story! You had my attention from the first line. Tucker and Amy's relationship is so cute! It's stories like this that make me want a boyfriend! The whole idea of being locked in a room with someone was amazing! The flow of the story was wonderful and you barely noticed how long it was. By the end your like, "Man, that was short." But then you realize just how long it was! I really enjoyed this. :)
1/27/2013 c1 mandymonster
It's solo friggin good:) I wish it was a full blown book:/
It's solo friggin good:) I wish it was a full blown book:/
1/22/2013 c1 1my princess ending
I thought it was a really good story. There were a few mistakes here and there but nothing serious. The plot of the story was unique and very creative.
xoxo,
JustWish
1my princess endingI thought it was a really good story. There were a few mistakes here and there but nothing serious. The plot of the story was unique and very creative.
xoxo,
JustWish
1/8/2013 c1 Guest
I love love love love this SO much! :)
I love love love love this SO much! :)
1/6/2013 c1 TooLong
I liked it, but I have some good and bad things to point out.
1) You could've added way more detail, there was so many oppurtunities where you could've added a few extra words, and that makes all the difference.
2) It was all kinda rushed, and I understand that you neeeded to fit it into a one-shot, but that doesn't change the facts, but you can't really do much about that.
1) I loved the characters, even if I don't feel like I know them as well as I could I tik you're on a good road with them
2) I like how you ended it with the thing about never being one of his battle scars, that was sweet!
3) The intro thingy was funny, I read 'so I'm not getting any tonight' and was like 'dafuq?!' but it made me laugh :)
I hop you relize that this isn't a flame, I am honestly giving you advice, that's the only way we can become better writers :)
- StealingChristmasLights x
I liked it, but I have some good and bad things to point out.
1) You could've added way more detail, there was so many oppurtunities where you could've added a few extra words, and that makes all the difference.
2) It was all kinda rushed, and I understand that you neeeded to fit it into a one-shot, but that doesn't change the facts, but you can't really do much about that.
1) I loved the characters, even if I don't feel like I know them as well as I could I tik you're on a good road with them
2) I like how you ended it with the thing about never being one of his battle scars, that was sweet!
3) The intro thingy was funny, I read 'so I'm not getting any tonight' and was like 'dafuq?!' but it made me laugh :)
I hop you relize that this isn't a flame, I am honestly giving you advice, that's the only way we can become better writers :)
- StealingChristmasLights x