for Battle Scars10/13/2011 c1 
8theBatmanisShakakah
I'd just like to say that this is in my top five favourite stories :) I mean, I'm a fictionpress story junkie and I've read a lot of good stories and yours...it was so sweet, relatable, the descriptions were beautiful, their relationship was so deep and profound and it had all the right elements in it. I just...I know it was written a while ago, I just wanted to say that I loved it, wonderfully written, awesome plot - Aussies are the bomb, thanks for the read :) x
8theBatmanisShakakahI'd just like to say that this is in my top five favourite stories :) I mean, I'm a fictionpress story junkie and I've read a lot of good stories and yours...it was so sweet, relatable, the descriptions were beautiful, their relationship was so deep and profound and it had all the right elements in it. I just...I know it was written a while ago, I just wanted to say that I loved it, wonderfully written, awesome plot - Aussies are the bomb, thanks for the read :) x
10/1/2011 c1 Ariellati
I've read this story about a little over a year ago, and yet it has still been my favorite one ever. I re-read this story almost every night before I go to sleep, because the story between Amy and Tucker is just so beautifully written, that it always makes me get butterflies in my heart and stomach every time I read it again. It brings me good dreams too.
I try to imagine how their lives would be after this story, and I always come to a blank. Because I know it probably wouldnt be close as to something you would write.
Have you ever thought of writing a sequel to this? Another one-shot maybe, a short story, or even a full written chapter story? Maybe your not ready for that yet, or maybe you probably never will. But it always keeps me up all night wondering how their was after the ending of this one-shot.
Wow super long review huh, well I hope this reaches you safe and well. Maybe if I'm lucky I'll get a reply. Who knows right?
You'll always be one of my most favorite writers ever, and this will always be one of my favorite stories ever.
~Amy
I've read this story about a little over a year ago, and yet it has still been my favorite one ever. I re-read this story almost every night before I go to sleep, because the story between Amy and Tucker is just so beautifully written, that it always makes me get butterflies in my heart and stomach every time I read it again. It brings me good dreams too.
I try to imagine how their lives would be after this story, and I always come to a blank. Because I know it probably wouldnt be close as to something you would write.
Have you ever thought of writing a sequel to this? Another one-shot maybe, a short story, or even a full written chapter story? Maybe your not ready for that yet, or maybe you probably never will. But it always keeps me up all night wondering how their was after the ending of this one-shot.
Wow super long review huh, well I hope this reaches you safe and well. Maybe if I'm lucky I'll get a reply. Who knows right?
You'll always be one of my most favorite writers ever, and this will always be one of my favorite stories ever.
~Amy
9/22/2011 c1 MarshmallowRabbitt
Such a beautiful story of healing and love...really makes me BELIEVE in what they're feeling. You did a fantastic work with the emotion in this piece! I applaud you!
Such a beautiful story of healing and love...really makes me BELIEVE in what they're feeling. You did a fantastic work with the emotion in this piece! I applaud you!
9/20/2011 c1 hannah
i loooove this story - its one of the one shots i find myself coming back to time and time again. You've done a really good job capturing his attraction to her, but I kinda feel that at the beginning I'm pretty unaware of her attraction to him until she actually says she's drawn to him. Its as if all her previous actions are pretty platonic towards him. From then on, though, it seems pretty equal:)
And as far as the ending.. cut out the last line. Its a little toooo cheesy. But thats all! You've done a really really great job on it, and I cant wait to re-read more of your works.
i loooove this story - its one of the one shots i find myself coming back to time and time again. You've done a really good job capturing his attraction to her, but I kinda feel that at the beginning I'm pretty unaware of her attraction to him until she actually says she's drawn to him. Its as if all her previous actions are pretty platonic towards him. From then on, though, it seems pretty equal:)
And as far as the ending.. cut out the last line. Its a little toooo cheesy. But thats all! You've done a really really great job on it, and I cant wait to re-read more of your works.
9/18/2011 c1 Dawn28
I love this story! :)
I love this story! :)
9/17/2011 c1 Silence of Night
I love your story! its like the perfect romance! so cute! :D o3o ^^ ;)
I love your story! its like the perfect romance! so cute! :D o3o ^^ ;)
9/11/2011 c1 Rosedreamer101
:) that was cute. im curious about the relationship between tucker and tristan =?
:) that was cute. im curious about the relationship between tucker and tristan =?
7/26/2011 c1 Lauranthalsala
Like the premise, not a big fan of the introduction. I feel like everything she said was so perfectly scripted to get under his skin.
Plus, I don't know why/when Tristan and Tucker had their falling out which I think would have made the story much better.
If you actually addressed it, but I just didn't read it because it's 2:20 in the morning and I'm not processing well, then I'm sorry, but those are my thoughts.
Otherwise I liked it :)
Like the premise, not a big fan of the introduction. I feel like everything she said was so perfectly scripted to get under his skin.
Plus, I don't know why/when Tristan and Tucker had their falling out which I think would have made the story much better.
If you actually addressed it, but I just didn't read it because it's 2:20 in the morning and I'm not processing well, then I'm sorry, but those are my thoughts.
Otherwise I liked it :)
7/6/2011 c1 VBH
I don't normally read One-Shots as I think they are sometimes just too short. But I loved this one. The only criticism i would make is that there's kind of a gap between the night and when Amy goes back to give him his shirt. It just feels somewhat weird because there's not much explanation about her feelings toward Tucker in the first part. But putting that aside, everything else was really good!
I don't normally read One-Shots as I think they are sometimes just too short. But I loved this one. The only criticism i would make is that there's kind of a gap between the night and when Amy goes back to give him his shirt. It just feels somewhat weird because there's not much explanation about her feelings toward Tucker in the first part. But putting that aside, everything else was really good!
7/3/2011 c1 ColourCascade
Awwww I loved it... you have a really nice writing style that made the story just perfect :)
Awwww I loved it... you have a really nice writing style that made the story just perfect :)
6/11/2011 c1 5nicolerools
this is soo amazing! i love it! i wish you'd make it into a full multichaptered story! maybe with tristan and his people at school trying to seperate them, so tristan would as to see her privately then tucker would walk in to see them in a comprimising position, then tristan and amy's friends would realize their miserable without each other, and get them back together. i dont know anything, i wanna know about their family's reaction, if tristan and tucker become close again. i feel like that aspect esp. isnt finished since most of his scars had to do with his brother, and the story ends with them being distant.
great story, i really loved it! hmm maybe a sequel instead?
5nicoleroolsthis is soo amazing! i love it! i wish you'd make it into a full multichaptered story! maybe with tristan and his people at school trying to seperate them, so tristan would as to see her privately then tucker would walk in to see them in a comprimising position, then tristan and amy's friends would realize their miserable without each other, and get them back together. i dont know anything, i wanna know about their family's reaction, if tristan and tucker become close again. i feel like that aspect esp. isnt finished since most of his scars had to do with his brother, and the story ends with them being distant.
great story, i really loved it! hmm maybe a sequel instead?
6/6/2011 c1 crazybelle
Just wanted to say I absolutely loved this story! Am steadily making my way through the rest of them now ^^
Just wanted to say I absolutely loved this story! Am steadily making my way through the rest of them now ^^