
8/10/2009 c2
14Kicon
*gasp* OMG that was so awesome! When Drake was thinking about how his family was, you put "not quiet broken" instead of "not quite broken".
~Kicon

*gasp* OMG that was so awesome! When Drake was thinking about how his family was, you put "not quiet broken" instead of "not quite broken".
~Kicon
8/10/2009 c2
5Number One Dancing Queen
...Wow I wonder what he thinks about her being his sister in law? Update Soon^_^

...Wow I wonder what he thinks about her being his sister in law? Update Soon^_^
7/6/2009 c1 kesah.rose
aww. i like it. keep posting. so just to make sure it is about drake and madison not angie and dylan right... post more soon. i like your writing style. it flows.
aww. i like it. keep posting. so just to make sure it is about drake and madison not angie and dylan right... post more soon. i like your writing style. it flows.
7/6/2009 c1
5Number One Dancing Queen
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! You got to update this as fast as you can because I want to know what happens! update soon.

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! You got to update this as fast as you can because I want to know what happens! update soon.
7/6/2009 c1
151ForeverBehindTheImpression
Yeah :) I really liked it! I like the fact that your main characters didnt meet in the first chapter, I think thats pretty unique :) Great work. Update please :)

Yeah :) I really liked it! I like the fact that your main characters didnt meet in the first chapter, I think thats pretty unique :) Great work. Update please :)
7/6/2009 c1 insert cute username here
I like how you've written the prologue in the past, and haven't actually made the characters meet each other. It shows a bit of depth, but it doesn't give it all away. Like the perfect balance!
I absolutely adore Madison already. It sounds like the kind of thing I used to get up to four years ago, before I had more important things to worry about :)
So yeah, this is good work. Post the next chapter as soon as you can!
I'll be waiting (: (That doesn't sound weird at all, haha)
Holly.
I like how you've written the prologue in the past, and haven't actually made the characters meet each other. It shows a bit of depth, but it doesn't give it all away. Like the perfect balance!
I absolutely adore Madison already. It sounds like the kind of thing I used to get up to four years ago, before I had more important things to worry about :)
So yeah, this is good work. Post the next chapter as soon as you can!
I'll be waiting (: (That doesn't sound weird at all, haha)
Holly.