
2/24/2010 c21
6light.and.darkness.angel
amazing story, amazing writer, just totally point blank amazing. This is a bit of a late review (sorry, school takes up a lot of time.) I'm excited for the sequel! Keep writing and growing! :)
-BlackRose274 (AKA light.and.darkness.angel)

amazing story, amazing writer, just totally point blank amazing. This is a bit of a late review (sorry, school takes up a lot of time.) I'm excited for the sequel! Keep writing and growing! :)
-BlackRose274 (AKA light.and.darkness.angel)
2/20/2010 c21
1A. Watts
Aw! This was really sweet.
I love Lee!
I can't wait for the sequel. What's going to happen?

Aw! This was really sweet.
I love Lee!
I can't wait for the sequel. What's going to happen?
2/19/2010 c21 3DarkGoddess3
Good Story. I'm glad that she didn't give in and get back with him after all the drugs and cheating. But its still sad cuz you wanted it to work out for them. Maybe in the sequel huh?
Good Story. I'm glad that she didn't give in and get back with him after all the drugs and cheating. But its still sad cuz you wanted it to work out for them. Maybe in the sequel huh?
2/15/2010 c20
25Wakao
Hello! I just want to say "bravo!" to you, for getting this far in your story, as in almost to the point of completion. I really like your writing style. It's very emotive and simply worded, but brilliant. (:
You have no qualms showing your characters as flawed but likeable at the same time. I'm still rooting for Lee. TBH I don't really like Danielle that much, she seems a bit too perfect. Or maybe I'm reading it wrong.
Good job & good luck.
-W

Hello! I just want to say "bravo!" to you, for getting this far in your story, as in almost to the point of completion. I really like your writing style. It's very emotive and simply worded, but brilliant. (:
You have no qualms showing your characters as flawed but likeable at the same time. I'm still rooting for Lee. TBH I don't really like Danielle that much, she seems a bit too perfect. Or maybe I'm reading it wrong.
Good job & good luck.
-W
2/6/2010 c20
1A. Watts
OMG! So unexpected!
But of course she loves him and she will help him, right? RIGHT?
Anyway, great chappie! CanNOT wait for the next one!

OMG! So unexpected!
But of course she loves him and she will help him, right? RIGHT?
Anyway, great chappie! CanNOT wait for the next one!
2/6/2010 c20
6light.and.darkness.angel
oohh Amanda has a secret side! :) loved it SO much :)
I really like the way you ended the chapter, I think that Amanda's question will force Danielle to confront how exactly she feels :)
I'm sad that this story will b over soon :'( but very happy that there will be a sequel! :)

oohh Amanda has a secret side! :) loved it SO much :)
I really like the way you ended the chapter, I think that Amanda's question will force Danielle to confront how exactly she feels :)
I'm sad that this story will b over soon :'( but very happy that there will be a sequel! :)
2/6/2010 c20
3Im Just Mlssundaztood
Loved the chapter.
I still don't really like Amanda...but she's the type of person I really don't get along with in real life..Well, can't wait to see what happens next.
-Im Just Mlssundaztood

Loved the chapter.
I still don't really like Amanda...but she's the type of person I really don't get along with in real life..Well, can't wait to see what happens next.
-Im Just Mlssundaztood
1/28/2010 c19
6light.and.darkness.angel
I am totally addicted to this story, just to let you know!
It's pretty amazing, I'm in love with the way you started it, and how you didn't drag every moment of every day out, you allowed the story to skip time and what not in the beginning. Very well written! :)
-BlackRose274
:)

I am totally addicted to this story, just to let you know!
It's pretty amazing, I'm in love with the way you started it, and how you didn't drag every moment of every day out, you allowed the story to skip time and what not in the beginning. Very well written! :)
-BlackRose274
:)
1/27/2010 c19
1A. Watts
Aww... Poor Danielle...
I wish she and Lee got back together, but I also hope that they don't, because no girl should ever get back together with a guy that cheated on her and hurt her.
But Danielle loves him, and all's fair in love and war... or so they say.

Aww... Poor Danielle...
I wish she and Lee got back together, but I also hope that they don't, because no girl should ever get back together with a guy that cheated on her and hurt her.
But Danielle loves him, and all's fair in love and war... or so they say.
1/26/2010 c19 JLeighC
Another great chapter! And I understand Danielle's position on things but I want Lee back! :D
Another great chapter! And I understand Danielle's position on things but I want Lee back! :D
1/26/2010 c19 insert cute username here
I don't know if I've reviewed since my last penname change but it's hollysarena (: Now onto the review.
Can I have Arsenio? Can I please, please, please, please, please have him? He's adorable!
Ah. Awkwardness - bus rides and tension, funnily enough I've been in a situation like this. It's never pretty.
Wonderful chapter (:
Update son!
Holly.
I don't know if I've reviewed since my last penname change but it's hollysarena (: Now onto the review.
Can I have Arsenio? Can I please, please, please, please, please have him? He's adorable!
Ah. Awkwardness - bus rides and tension, funnily enough I've been in a situation like this. It's never pretty.
Wonderful chapter (:
Update son!
Holly.
1/19/2010 c18 JLeighC
Funny, brilliant and very witty. I loved it. I can't wait for the next chapter. Well done! :)
Funny, brilliant and very witty. I loved it. I can't wait for the next chapter. Well done! :)