for Open Windows and Closed Doors9/26/2009 c8 
7Your Execution
lol scratch and sniff sticker. ANYWAY I'm sorry I've been meaning to write a reveiw but I am really lazy. I like the story so far, but something bugs me about Lee. I'm not sure what it is. Something about him just seems...off. It's like I dont trust him. Which is weird because he only exists in your mind and the story. But i shall leave you with this: I really do like this story. :D
7Your Executionlol scratch and sniff sticker. ANYWAY I'm sorry I've been meaning to write a reveiw but I am really lazy. I like the story so far, but something bugs me about Lee. I'm not sure what it is. Something about him just seems...off. It's like I dont trust him. Which is weird because he only exists in your mind and the story. But i shall leave you with this: I really do like this story. :D
9/26/2009 c8 JJKim
hahahahhaha! i love the last line.“Maybe it’s like a scratch and sniff sticker,” Matthew offered. i cracked up! still smiling thinking about it!
hahahahhaha! i love the last line.“Maybe it’s like a scratch and sniff sticker,” Matthew offered. i cracked up! still smiling thinking about it!
9/26/2009 c8 12Double-Sins
ROFL on the last joke. Scratch and sniff sticker. Nice. I saw this story tonight after you updated and started from Chapter 1 and read up to Chapter 8 now and decided to finally leave you a review.
I haven't been on this site in years, but I'm glad to have returned and find this story. Very funny.
Keep to it.
As far as Matthew and Destiny, I think you should stick to Danielle and Lee, but you can still do major developement of Matthew and Destiny from Danielle's eyes, but it needs have an effect on Danielle/Lee so the story can continue to move. Don't let the story stall.
I'll continue to read if you continue to update. :) :)
12Double-SinsROFL on the last joke. Scratch and sniff sticker. Nice. I saw this story tonight after you updated and started from Chapter 1 and read up to Chapter 8 now and decided to finally leave you a review.
I haven't been on this site in years, but I'm glad to have returned and find this story. Very funny.
Keep to it.
As far as Matthew and Destiny, I think you should stick to Danielle and Lee, but you can still do major developement of Matthew and Destiny from Danielle's eyes, but it needs have an effect on Danielle/Lee so the story can continue to move. Don't let the story stall.
I'll continue to read if you continue to update. :) :)
9/23/2009 c7 2into the black
I don't know why but I have a thing for gorgeous druggie bad boys. Anyways, these chapters are too short haha. Please update soon because it's pretty good so far.
2into the blackI don't know why but I have a thing for gorgeous druggie bad boys. Anyways, these chapters are too short haha. Please update soon because it's pretty good so far.
9/23/2009 c7 1A. Watts
Great chapter!
And you don't really suck, it's just writer's block. And also the stress of having to face teachers every day.
1A. WattsGreat chapter!
And you don't really suck, it's just writer's block. And also the stress of having to face teachers every day.
8/22/2009 c6 1Me102
oh i'm really liking this story! i can't wait for more ;) it's definitely getting added to my faves!
ps if you have the chance would u mind checking out my faerie story?
thanks!
1Me102oh i'm really liking this story! i can't wait for more ;) it's definitely getting added to my faves!
ps if you have the chance would u mind checking out my faerie story?
thanks!
8/9/2009 c5 1chaos0marine
great story so far! it has some real potential! i so cannot wait to read about their date. xD plz update soon! =D
1chaos0marinegreat story so far! it has some real potential! i so cannot wait to read about their date. xD plz update soon! =D