
7/24/2009 c3
12br02b
It's really intriguing, I like this sort of unlikely-relationship thing that's building. Keep it going!

It's really intriguing, I like this sort of unlikely-relationship thing that's building. Keep it going!
7/23/2009 c3
8Skittlezzify
"Men aren't cute."
"Good thing you're not a man then."
Ha ha funny!
more plz!

"Men aren't cute."
"Good thing you're not a man then."
Ha ha funny!
more plz!
7/22/2009 c3
6A Kiss in the Dreamhouse
Loved it! Man, Lee is so vain! But Im loving the heroine. Also, I think that in the first paragraph, you meant 'imagination' instead of 'imagine'. Apologies in advance for my nit picking, lol.
Keep it up!

Loved it! Man, Lee is so vain! But Im loving the heroine. Also, I think that in the first paragraph, you meant 'imagination' instead of 'imagine'. Apologies in advance for my nit picking, lol.
Keep it up!
7/21/2009 c3 Jennebeth
wow! i like it. and i love all the smart remarks.i'm so glad you made the girl the way she is. hope you can update soon!
wow! i like it. and i love all the smart remarks.i'm so glad you made the girl the way she is. hope you can update soon!
7/21/2009 c3
1A. Watts
This is really great! Your characters have great and defined personalities.
I can't wait for more!

This is really great! Your characters have great and defined personalities.
I can't wait for more!
7/20/2009 c2
6A Kiss in the Dreamhouse
Great second chapter! Love your descriptions - they are comical.

Great second chapter! Love your descriptions - they are comical.
7/17/2009 c2 ishta
so far so good. i like the new chapter cant wait to get to know the characters a little better. it seems like it ll b a interesting story.
so far so good. i like the new chapter cant wait to get to know the characters a little better. it seems like it ll b a interesting story.