for Little Mysteries7/7/2009 c1 
173Little girl Big world
This was very unique and interesting. I enjoyed reading it. Great word choice and wonderful imagery. The lines particularity that I liked were, "frail spider legs camouflaged in mascara" and "and nightmares of windows where I shut the blinds" Great job, well written!
173Little girl Big worldThis was very unique and interesting. I enjoyed reading it. Great word choice and wonderful imagery. The lines particularity that I liked were, "frail spider legs camouflaged in mascara" and "and nightmares of windows where I shut the blinds" Great job, well written!
7/7/2009 c1 17K.G. Coleman
Very nice. Trippy. You should consider putting some punctuation in though. I mean, technically when reading a poem you're just supposed to buzz right on through until there's a comma or period. I don't think that's what you're looking for in your poem. Good though. Intriguing.
17K.G. ColemanVery nice. Trippy. You should consider putting some punctuation in though. I mean, technically when reading a poem you're just supposed to buzz right on through until there's a comma or period. I don't think that's what you're looking for in your poem. Good though. Intriguing.