for Friends with Benefits II10/5/2014 c39 Apple53
OH MY GOD! This is one of the best stories I've read! I loved every part of it! I'm just soooo in love with it! It's adorable and sad and just sooo perfect!
OH MY GOD! This is one of the best stories I've read! I loved every part of it! I'm just soooo in love with it! It's adorable and sad and just sooo perfect!
33/22/2014 c28 Guest
I don't know how I lasted this long. Kennedy is a b*tch, and I hope Dante will ditch her for someone better.
Sorry, but this story is not for me.
I don't know how I lasted this long. Kennedy is a b*tch, and I hope Dante will ditch her for someone better.
Sorry, but this story is not for me.
3/22/2014 c23 Guest
Kennedy is such a a a...urghhgggfggfg!
Dante can do way better than her.
Kennedy is such a a a...urghhgggfggfg!
Dante can do way better than her.
4/26/2013 c39 Guest
Hated it. The writing is very immature.
Hated it. The writing is very immature.
10/12/2012 c23 Helpful Hints
I like the storyline, but I find myself skimming over roughly half of each chapter. You provide way too much detail, it's too methodical. I would love to read this after it's been edited and polished up. Other than the over-abundance of detail, I think it's a great story. :)
I like the storyline, but I find myself skimming over roughly half of each chapter. You provide way too much detail, it's too methodical. I would love to read this after it's been edited and polished up. Other than the over-abundance of detail, I think it's a great story. :)
8/6/2012 c39 intercostalspace
what? kenny never even said i love you to him ever in this entire fic...just that one when she was wasted. an epilogue would be great.
what? kenny never even said i love you to him ever in this entire fic...just that one when she was wasted. an epilogue would be great.
8/6/2012 c38 intercostalspace
sigh you know there are people in this world like kenny. those who keep making mistakes and repeating it. although they wouldn't want to disappoint other people, they just seem to do it all the time. somehow she just seems like that to me. i hope she loves him.
sigh you know there are people in this world like kenny. those who keep making mistakes and repeating it. although they wouldn't want to disappoint other people, they just seem to do it all the time. somehow she just seems like that to me. i hope she loves him.
8/5/2012 c32 intercostalspace
ok that was a revelation, but i wonder who's better in bed, will or dante? :D
ok that was a revelation, but i wonder who's better in bed, will or dante? :D