for Why To Stare At Purple Monkeys9/1/2010 c1 TheMoltenWindow
I was stressing out so I came on fiction press and I'm so glad I read this story! You made me smile and completely calm down, I want a sparky too.
I was stressing out so I came on fiction press and I'm so glad I read this story! You made me smile and completely calm down, I want a sparky too.
1/27/2010 c1 MK16
OMFG
this is
one of my favourite storys EVER now
haha its so utterly random!
and cute and fluffy with all sorts of goodness that makes my tummy feel all warm and tingly
^_^
(Y) i like this. i like this a LOT.
OMFG
this is
one of my favourite storys EVER now
haha its so utterly random!
and cute and fluffy with all sorts of goodness that makes my tummy feel all warm and tingly
^_^
(Y) i like this. i like this a LOT.
1/4/2010 c1 
14Beautiful Destination
This was a great story for something that you wrote in 37 minutes! It was very cute :)
14Beautiful DestinationThis was a great story for something that you wrote in 37 minutes! It was very cute :)
11/4/2009 c1 Mxya
LOL that was halarity!
i loved it! absolutely loved it!
totally awesome :)
Thanks for writing!
~Mxya
LOL that was halarity!
i loved it! absolutely loved it!
totally awesome :)
Thanks for writing!
~Mxya
11/1/2009 c1 8maiff
Ahh... purple monkeys xD
Simple and cute story (not to mention PURPLE MONKEYS) = my liking :D
8maiffAhh... purple monkeys xD
Simple and cute story (not to mention PURPLE MONKEYS) = my liking :D
7/19/2009 c1 10CassandraStacy
So this is hilarious. Completely A D O R E it. And now I want a purple monkey . . . and a cute man to buy one for me.
Cassandra
10CassandraStacySo this is hilarious. Completely A D O R E it. And now I want a purple monkey . . . and a cute man to buy one for me.
Cassandra
7/13/2009 c1 9Lily Llynn
I disagree with this: "I had never quite liked my name –it was just so common for a redhead to be named Amanda!" and I do wonder why such a normal, sweet boy likes such a weird girl, but this was cute and fluffy, and I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:
9Lily LlynnI disagree with this: "I had never quite liked my name –it was just so common for a redhead to be named Amanda!" and I do wonder why such a normal, sweet boy likes such a weird girl, but this was cute and fluffy, and I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:
7/8/2009 c1 11the ignorance of it all
All I got out of my writing sprint was a high lawyer's assistant with a dead mother. x_X
I like your story much better. :)
You did a very good job on this. I was grinning the whole way through it. :)
If you consider editing it, I would suggest a better description of the monkey at the beginning. I was picturing a real monkey at a zoo. Which is really rather disturbing.
Anyway, well done. :D
11the ignorance of it allAll I got out of my writing sprint was a high lawyer's assistant with a dead mother. x_X
I like your story much better. :)
You did a very good job on this. I was grinning the whole way through it. :)
If you consider editing it, I would suggest a better description of the monkey at the beginning. I was picturing a real monkey at a zoo. Which is really rather disturbing.
Anyway, well done. :D
7/8/2009 c1 JZK
so cute! really original too. the mcs personality seems like shes 5 - but thats what makes it funny
so cute! really original too. the mcs personality seems like shes 5 - but thats what makes it funny
7/8/2009 c1 13blurrylights
This was so cute! :) And pretty well written considering you were writing for 37 minutes only. Some of the grammar was off in the dialog, but overall, very nice job. :D
13blurrylightsThis was so cute! :) And pretty well written considering you were writing for 37 minutes only. Some of the grammar was off in the dialog, but overall, very nice job. :D
7/8/2009 c1 11Aliarcy
So..so weird! But I do love it! Though the MC is a bit.. well, lets just say when he mentioned not raping her and her personality, I rather pictured her as a five year old clinging to a monkey. But hey! Whatever! That's where all the fun's at! And the boldness of the guy is pretty amazing too~ I must come to one of these writing sprints. o: Good job and keep up the good work! -Ali from SKOW
11AliarcySo..so weird! But I do love it! Though the MC is a bit.. well, lets just say when he mentioned not raping her and her personality, I rather pictured her as a five year old clinging to a monkey. But hey! Whatever! That's where all the fun's at! And the boldness of the guy is pretty amazing too~ I must come to one of these writing sprints. o: Good job and keep up the good work! -Ali from SKOW