for Ghost Town4/20/2019 c45 Guest
I love you and hope you are healthy and happy. Your work is beautiful, thank you for writing this story and creating this world. Good luck on your endeavors
I love you and hope you are healthy and happy. Your work is beautiful, thank you for writing this story and creating this world. Good luck on your endeavors
11/26/2011 c45 Luna
A lovely, well-written, and entertaining story that simply sucks one in. While, the initial relationship between Yulia and Manson seemed rather quick and unexpected (compared to his initial dislike of her), the way the relationship progressed was rather lovely and the world you created was just fascinating. It is only a pity there was not more exploration, some inner court politics would have been interesting, but likely better placed in a separate story of their own.
Filled with unusual creatures, unexpected twists, a little intrigue, and enough romance to stir the heart, this was simply a delightful read and one of the very best stories I have found on this site.
Wonderfully creative and very refreshing, you have quite the aptitude as a writer and I am very grateful that you chose to share this work with readers like myself. Thank you.
Of your unfortunate trial, I have to say I only have the highest admiration for your courage and your strength and the deepest compassion for your suffering. After suffering such a horrible injustice you still manage to write beautifully, continuing your art in such a manner that exemplifies the true strength and beautiful resilience of your soul. You are truly admirable. I do not think I could survive such a thing, not with such the strength of spirit you have shown. It is, so much easier after all, to give up, even if it is no where near worth it.
A lovely, well-written, and entertaining story that simply sucks one in. While, the initial relationship between Yulia and Manson seemed rather quick and unexpected (compared to his initial dislike of her), the way the relationship progressed was rather lovely and the world you created was just fascinating. It is only a pity there was not more exploration, some inner court politics would have been interesting, but likely better placed in a separate story of their own.
Filled with unusual creatures, unexpected twists, a little intrigue, and enough romance to stir the heart, this was simply a delightful read and one of the very best stories I have found on this site.
Wonderfully creative and very refreshing, you have quite the aptitude as a writer and I am very grateful that you chose to share this work with readers like myself. Thank you.
Of your unfortunate trial, I have to say I only have the highest admiration for your courage and your strength and the deepest compassion for your suffering. After suffering such a horrible injustice you still manage to write beautifully, continuing your art in such a manner that exemplifies the true strength and beautiful resilience of your soul. You are truly admirable. I do not think I could survive such a thing, not with such the strength of spirit you have shown. It is, so much easier after all, to give up, even if it is no where near worth it.
2/17/2011 c45 
6Onessa Vanessa
Hey,
I thought your story was really great. The plot was very well developed and different from anything I've read. I'm certainly going to be reading all your other pieces now as I really enjoyed this one. The only problem I had with it was Bero. While I liked the character, I disliked the fact that he was in Yulia's body and was with Mason as well. It was a bit confusing, and I found that Yulia's character fell to the wayside with the introduction of Bero. I also wanted to say that I think that you are a very strong individual for going through what you went through and still being able to find the inspiration to write just as well as you did before. Also, because I'm from BC, I liked to see your western canada-esque updates. Canadian seems so ontario based so often!
Keep up with the writing, I think you really have talent.
6Onessa VanessaHey,
I thought your story was really great. The plot was very well developed and different from anything I've read. I'm certainly going to be reading all your other pieces now as I really enjoyed this one. The only problem I had with it was Bero. While I liked the character, I disliked the fact that he was in Yulia's body and was with Mason as well. It was a bit confusing, and I found that Yulia's character fell to the wayside with the introduction of Bero. I also wanted to say that I think that you are a very strong individual for going through what you went through and still being able to find the inspiration to write just as well as you did before. Also, because I'm from BC, I liked to see your western canada-esque updates. Canadian seems so ontario based so often!
Keep up with the writing, I think you really have talent.
1/23/2011 c38 Words
Yah, it's me again, I'm just totally pissed off. I. DON'T. LIKE. BERO. He is conctantly taking over Yulia on important parts of the stary, he slept with Yulia's boyfreind, he only loves Mason because Yulia does, and he is not one with Yulia or a split-personality, he is a completely different person. If Bero was still in his guy body would Mason still be with him, I mean he's basically cheating on her, it doesn't matter that Yulia and Bero share the same body, that's wrong. It doesn't matter what relation Bero has with Yulia, Mason's still cheating, and Yulia's okay with this because she knows Bero loves him (although he only loves him because of her), Yulia can't just go sharing her boyfreind with anyone who loves him. That's just totally messed up. Mason obviously doesn't love her iif hed have sex with another person.
Yah, it's me again, I'm just totally pissed off. I. DON'T. LIKE. BERO. He is conctantly taking over Yulia on important parts of the stary, he slept with Yulia's boyfreind, he only loves Mason because Yulia does, and he is not one with Yulia or a split-personality, he is a completely different person. If Bero was still in his guy body would Mason still be with him, I mean he's basically cheating on her, it doesn't matter that Yulia and Bero share the same body, that's wrong. It doesn't matter what relation Bero has with Yulia, Mason's still cheating, and Yulia's okay with this because she knows Bero loves him (although he only loves him because of her), Yulia can't just go sharing her boyfreind with anyone who loves him. That's just totally messed up. Mason obviously doesn't love her iif hed have sex with another person.
1/23/2011 c32 Words
i find this "sharing mason" thing, super retarted. if mason feels atracted, or even likes someone else it means that he doesn't truly love her, if he likes a voice that's not Yulia's or physical traits that aren't hers either than he doesn't really love her, it seems like he just likes her body. This story would be better if Bero didn't get involved in her personal life, and especially not start one of his own with the people in hers for that matter. Also, Mason being with Bero is just gay, it doesn't matter if the dude is in a girls body it's still gay. I didn't really mind Vitus and Odin, but for the one of the main character to be with a dude, while with Yulia is just wrong, and cruel. I liked this story up to the last chapter, i just find what's going on to be the most meanest thing ever, i mean Mason and Bero together while Yulia has to watch? That's just terrible, from now on im skipping over any personal scenes including Mason, Yulia, and/or Bero
i find this "sharing mason" thing, super retarted. if mason feels atracted, or even likes someone else it means that he doesn't truly love her, if he likes a voice that's not Yulia's or physical traits that aren't hers either than he doesn't really love her, it seems like he just likes her body. This story would be better if Bero didn't get involved in her personal life, and especially not start one of his own with the people in hers for that matter. Also, Mason being with Bero is just gay, it doesn't matter if the dude is in a girls body it's still gay. I didn't really mind Vitus and Odin, but for the one of the main character to be with a dude, while with Yulia is just wrong, and cruel. I liked this story up to the last chapter, i just find what's going on to be the most meanest thing ever, i mean Mason and Bero together while Yulia has to watch? That's just terrible, from now on im skipping over any personal scenes including Mason, Yulia, and/or Bero
12/29/2010 c41 9DarkNight77
You're a brave woman. I know it's hard, and I hope it's not damaged you too much. You're not alone, and to me, that's what really helped. So I tell you this, I admire the hell out of you for speaking up about it, most don't. Take care and happy new year, may it be a better year for you this year, and don't forget, you're not alone.
9DarkNight77You're a brave woman. I know it's hard, and I hope it's not damaged you too much. You're not alone, and to me, that's what really helped. So I tell you this, I admire the hell out of you for speaking up about it, most don't. Take care and happy new year, may it be a better year for you this year, and don't forget, you're not alone.
12/29/2010 c30 DarkNight77
I really like it. I think it would've been neat to see what happened in the seelie court as well though. Other then that great movement in your storyline.
I really like it. I think it would've been neat to see what happened in the seelie court as well though. Other then that great movement in your storyline.
12/29/2010 c28 DarkNight77
I like the concept of Thange, although, it seems like Thange is two different people himself. He's really into the physical with Odin, but with Vitus, he's much much deeper. Then again, it's also understandable givin the circumstances that have been described so far. Love the story though, definitely added to my favorites.
I like the concept of Thange, although, it seems like Thange is two different people himself. He's really into the physical with Odin, but with Vitus, he's much much deeper. Then again, it's also understandable givin the circumstances that have been described so far. Love the story though, definitely added to my favorites.
12/29/2010 c25 DarkNight77
Ok, Odin and Vitus are definately my favorite characters. I love how you've written them to be so different and so unique, but at the same time so in sync and just awesome in general.
Ok, Odin and Vitus are definately my favorite characters. I love how you've written them to be so different and so unique, but at the same time so in sync and just awesome in general.
12/28/2010 c8 DarkNight77
I really like your story! I hope as I read on it stays as funny and witty as it has so far. However for some reason I feel vaguely offended by Mason talking about attraction. I don't really know why though, and I'm sure it's just me, it just hit me awkwardly. Still, awesome story and good character development!
I really like your story! I hope as I read on it stays as funny and witty as it has so far. However for some reason I feel vaguely offended by Mason talking about attraction. I don't really know why though, and I'm sure it's just me, it just hit me awkwardly. Still, awesome story and good character development!
11/17/2010 c45 AndItMovesUsAll
O i loved it! I like that we got to see them in the future- Vitus and Odin's jobs were so suited to them! Also its cool that you didnt go down the route of cliche, cheesy lovey-dovey ending, with promises for the future, it worked out just right. Cant wait to read the new story!
Shannen :)
O i loved it! I like that we got to see them in the future- Vitus and Odin's jobs were so suited to them! Also its cool that you didnt go down the route of cliche, cheesy lovey-dovey ending, with promises for the future, it worked out just right. Cant wait to read the new story!
Shannen :)
11/14/2010 c45 10Itsa Mia
AW CUTE XD I like the way you wrote this chapter :D i like how she was watching, and honestly it was adorable :D I loved it xD I'm happy it's over :D Like, in a good way. Not like yay it's finally done, but like yay happy ending! 8Dv hahaha i dunno i'm hyper so ...I'm not a productive reviewer today 8Dv
I'll be waiting for your next story! :D
10Itsa MiaAW CUTE XD I like the way you wrote this chapter :D i like how she was watching, and honestly it was adorable :D I loved it xD I'm happy it's over :D Like, in a good way. Not like yay it's finally done, but like yay happy ending! 8Dv hahaha i dunno i'm hyper so ...I'm not a productive reviewer today 8Dv
I'll be waiting for your next story! :D
11/13/2010 c45 Elodie Wolfe
LOVE IT
SO CUTE
ALSO THE SCYTHE! :D
Also, I'm excited for the next story, as usual. I think this is now one of my favorites. Which all of your stuff is, so I need to reread errything, but you know.
I love you. :]
Love Elodie~
LOVE IT
SO CUTE
ALSO THE SCYTHE! :D
Also, I'm excited for the next story, as usual. I think this is now one of my favorites. Which all of your stuff is, so I need to reread errything, but you know.
I love you. :]
Love Elodie~
10/21/2010 c44 AndItMovesUsAll
Ah i loved these last two chapters, its just what you need after all the heartbreak and war in the ones before. Can i just say that i LOVE Odin? Definately my favourite character, and i loved that he wanted to work with children, its so cute!
Ah i loved these last two chapters, its just what you need after all the heartbreak and war in the ones before. Can i just say that i LOVE Odin? Definately my favourite character, and i loved that he wanted to work with children, its so cute!