for Do The Dew11/17/2013 c1 toffee
pretty fun to read. Thanks.
pretty fun to read. Thanks.
5/18/2013 c1 Amy
Two words..
Freaking amazing!
Two words..
Freaking amazing!
10/23/2012 c1 justjuice
LOVE IT! Such a well written one shot. It was so cute, adorable, sexy and amazing :D well done :)
LOVE IT! Such a well written one shot. It was so cute, adorable, sexy and amazing :D well done :)
1/26/2012 c1 Rosedreamer101
OMG. I LOVE THIS! AND THE MOUNTAIN DEW DATE THING? GENIUUUUSSSS ! AHH I WAS GETTING TURNED ON BY THEIR CHEMISTRY ! (TMI) BUT STILL! I LOVE THIS STORYYYYY 3333
OMG. I LOVE THIS! AND THE MOUNTAIN DEW DATE THING? GENIUUUUSSSS ! AHH I WAS GETTING TURNED ON BY THEIR CHEMISTRY ! (TMI) BUT STILL! I LOVE THIS STORYYYYY 3333
10/6/2011 c1 
13youngin-matomon
Total cliche yes. But I didn't think the build-up was all that good. It fell a little flat for me in the end because I kept going like "Whoa man, if my boyfriend had left me there to be almost-raped just because he didn't trust me or my love in him enough, there is NO WAY IN THE BURNING PITS OF HELL OR THE LOVELY GARDENS OF HEAVEN that I would get back with him. EVER. Even if I was in love"
Also, I kept wondering WHY DIDN'T MICHAEL JUST TELL SPENCE THE TRUTH? 'I'm lazy' IS NO EXCUSE.
For the first time, I am disappointed with your story.
WRITING ROCKS AS USUAL, but story? Neh man, neh. :(
13youngin-matomonTotal cliche yes. But I didn't think the build-up was all that good. It fell a little flat for me in the end because I kept going like "Whoa man, if my boyfriend had left me there to be almost-raped just because he didn't trust me or my love in him enough, there is NO WAY IN THE BURNING PITS OF HELL OR THE LOVELY GARDENS OF HEAVEN that I would get back with him. EVER. Even if I was in love"
Also, I kept wondering WHY DIDN'T MICHAEL JUST TELL SPENCE THE TRUTH? 'I'm lazy' IS NO EXCUSE.
For the first time, I am disappointed with your story.
WRITING ROCKS AS USUAL, but story? Neh man, neh. :(
5/2/2010 c1 i am a girl
i am falling more and more in love with your stories. can't wait for more!:D
i am falling more and more in love with your stories. can't wait for more!:D
12/3/2009 c1 Myr
CUTE! :)
CUTE! :)
9/27/2009 c1 6Bleucrystale05
I loved it! =o This is the second story ive read from you and im liking it so far. i think im going to add you as one of my favorite authors. you also seem nice to me..XD
its nice! wo! :D
6Bleucrystale05I loved it! =o This is the second story ive read from you and im liking it so far. i think im going to add you as one of my favorite authors. you also seem nice to me..XD
its nice! wo! :D
9/4/2009 c1 1Damned to heaven
This is completely amazing. I adore this story. They make one wonderful couple. Brilliant.
1Damned to heavenThis is completely amazing. I adore this story. They make one wonderful couple. Brilliant.
8/31/2009 c1 6StarrburstNoodles
AH!
I loved this!
I, like you, am a diehard fan of this particular cliché. :D
So this was AMAZING and I'm gonna go read some more of your stories. :)
~Sn
6StarrburstNoodlesAH!
I loved this!
I, like you, am a diehard fan of this particular cliché. :D
So this was AMAZING and I'm gonna go read some more of your stories. :)
~Sn
8/30/2009 c1 5RoseBriar32192
OMG OMG OMG OMG! THIS STORY IS SO FREAKIN ADORABLE! Ok, I loved this story, so I might just read some more by you. - RoseBriar
(P.S. I only sign with RoseBriar on AWESOME books and stories!)
5RoseBriar32192OMG OMG OMG OMG! THIS STORY IS SO FREAKIN ADORABLE! Ok, I loved this story, so I might just read some more by you. - RoseBriar
(P.S. I only sign with RoseBriar on AWESOME books and stories!)