for One Chance, One Moment, One Summer11/30/2012 c1 Christiane
it's beautiful. :) it's funny, cause i actually got their exact faces and everything in my head, and i can never do that with characters. i love that you didn't describe them except for the girl's hair, or give them names, because it shows they could be anything, or anyone. it also adds a sort of distance, like the boy is Him to her and the girl is Her to him. it's perfect, i love this. :D
it's beautiful. :) it's funny, cause i actually got their exact faces and everything in my head, and i can never do that with characters. i love that you didn't describe them except for the girl's hair, or give them names, because it shows they could be anything, or anyone. it also adds a sort of distance, like the boy is Him to her and the girl is Her to him. it's perfect, i love this. :D
8/1/2012 c1 Guest
Huh. Interesting? Not sure what to say. It's not bad, though.
Huh. Interesting? Not sure what to say. It's not bad, though.
8/21/2010 c1 silentsings
Light Stars or Lieutenant of Artemis. And no. No. No. And NO. I am not a stalker. I just think your stories are super amazing and I have to read every single one of them. Is that stalking? ;)
Anyways, great job with this! It's so original. It's so sad. I love bittersweet stories. You are amazing. What would I give to get a brain or something like yours...?
Keep it up!
-Light
Light Stars or Lieutenant of Artemis. And no. No. No. And NO. I am not a stalker. I just think your stories are super amazing and I have to read every single one of them. Is that stalking? ;)
Anyways, great job with this! It's so original. It's so sad. I love bittersweet stories. You are amazing. What would I give to get a brain or something like yours...?
Keep it up!
-Light
7/23/2010 c1 
2cheveux roux
So heartbreaking, but so amazing! This is truly one of the best oneshots I've read in a long time. I love how the girl and the boy don't have names, and I love the italics taking place of quotation marks as they talked to each other. It's very realistic and very, very well written. Well done.
2cheveux rouxSo heartbreaking, but so amazing! This is truly one of the best oneshots I've read in a long time. I love how the girl and the boy don't have names, and I love the italics taking place of quotation marks as they talked to each other. It's very realistic and very, very well written. Well done.
3/27/2010 c1 waterprincess
thanks alot after i read this my eyes were watering like no tomorrow thanks i really needed that. can't you write another one that has a happy ending? plz! thanks!
thanks alot after i read this my eyes were watering like no tomorrow thanks i really needed that. can't you write another one that has a happy ending? plz! thanks!
11/11/2009 c1 unidentified
this is great. can you turn this into a fanfic like thing?
this is great. can you turn this into a fanfic like thing?
9/20/2009 c1 48Antonette C
ouch... what a sad story :(. but i love it. it's simple but very beautiful!
48Antonette Couch... what a sad story :(. but i love it. it's simple but very beautiful!
9/20/2009 c1 8SmallTownUSAx3
Wow, this has to be the best summer love story i've ever read. I could picture every moment in my head. Great work.
8SmallTownUSAx3Wow, this has to be the best summer love story i've ever read. I could picture every moment in my head. Great work.
9/20/2009 c1 1weatheredglass
This is beautiful! I adore it. I can really relate and it was written so well =] Fabulous job!
1weatheredglassThis is beautiful! I adore it. I can really relate and it was written so well =] Fabulous job!
8/26/2009 c1 thatLCgirl
Omigod! This story was cute, sweet, and sad all in one! I totally loved it; am a sucker for these kind of stories. Great job on writing it :)
Omigod! This story was cute, sweet, and sad all in one! I totally loved it; am a sucker for these kind of stories. Great job on writing it :)
8/26/2009 c1 2Goldenstars
Wow. You create a feeling of hopelessness and witfulness that I've never had created by a piece of writing for me before.
Bravo on that. I truely feel empathatic for these people.
2GoldenstarsWow. You create a feeling of hopelessness and witfulness that I've never had created by a piece of writing for me before.
Bravo on that. I truely feel empathatic for these people.
8/11/2009 c1 Lifeguard's Apprentice
This was beautiful! It really makes sense, and I love it so much. This was about Edward and Bella, right? I just looked down at the well rounded critique thing, and I honestly can't find anything worth improving in this story. It's already too good. I'm not saying I'm a great author or anything, but I really can't find anything. Thanks for the amazing story.
This was beautiful! It really makes sense, and I love it so much. This was about Edward and Bella, right? I just looked down at the well rounded critique thing, and I honestly can't find anything worth improving in this story. It's already too good. I'm not saying I'm a great author or anything, but I really can't find anything. Thanks for the amazing story.
7/15/2009 c1 leprechaunsareknronos'sservant
Well... Do you remember me from fanfiction? That's right... I went here, just to read another one of your amazing stories. Was I disappointed? NOT IN THE SLIGHTEST! THIS WAS AMAZING! HOLY POOP! Well... Not much else to say. Cause it's amazinglyawesome.
Your faithful reader person thingy,
leprechaunsarekronos'sservants
Well... Do you remember me from fanfiction? That's right... I went here, just to read another one of your amazing stories. Was I disappointed? NOT IN THE SLIGHTEST! THIS WAS AMAZING! HOLY POOP! Well... Not much else to say. Cause it's amazinglyawesome.
Your faithful reader person thingy,
leprechaunsarekronos'sservants
7/9/2009 c1 2Sophiesticated
AHH I love this story! It's romantic and bittersweet at the same time. The writing flows well. The ending is perfect. You did an amazing job, I can't believe you're thirteen! I'm so impressed! This proves why it's wrong to underestimate the writing skills of young teens (not that I have amazing writing skills...). I hope you're having a great summer yourself. =]
2SophiesticatedAHH I love this story! It's romantic and bittersweet at the same time. The writing flows well. The ending is perfect. You did an amazing job, I can't believe you're thirteen! I'm so impressed! This proves why it's wrong to underestimate the writing skills of young teens (not that I have amazing writing skills...). I hope you're having a great summer yourself. =]