for Prim, Proper And Pristine3/14/2010 c1 Jay827
interesting start. i'm guessing there has to be some other form of background behind Jake's character, but update to the first official chapter when possible.
interesting start. i'm guessing there has to be some other form of background behind Jake's character, but update to the first official chapter when possible.
9/2/2009 c1 
2nocturnal buddha
oh! I already really like this! Jake and Jocelyn are so interesting. Whenever I write I always have trouble with developing characters, but your characters already have distinct qualities.
Please, please update! I want to see what happens!
2nocturnal buddhaoh! I already really like this! Jake and Jocelyn are so interesting. Whenever I write I always have trouble with developing characters, but your characters already have distinct qualities.
Please, please update! I want to see what happens!