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7/27/2009 c12 cocorolla
I am immensely confused... Like extremely beyond confused. @_@

It almost seems like you skipped a chapter or something...?

But Yes, This story is loved dearly ;D I 'gasm whenever I see an update. XD

I do so love Demetri and Pheonix, they're just a lovely pair. *inlove*
7/26/2009 c10 Masquerade of Misanthropy
Hiya. I just wanted to let you know that I am really enjoying your story so far. I like the fact that you're utilizing seers and other magic users instead of just vampires. Your story is one of the more innovative supernatural fics that I have seen in a while. Great job, can't wait to read more.
7/26/2009 c11 Faiyaa
Sory for the late review...Mrs Jeeves is a bee-yatch. Byron has been a great friend to him and she is just a qrinkly old prune with saggy skin. LMAO. I'm on a roll. update soon.
7/23/2009 c10 Faiyaa
Sorry that I didn't review chapter 9. Truthfully, I really didn't know what to make of it so I was waiting for chapter 10. I'm sorry but I think Luciano is one of my fave characters...because you have to love the bad guy. I hope Phoenix dosen't cave and turns himself in to his dad.
7/23/2009 c10 cocorolla
Luciano is a simply...ghastly creature. D:

And Phoenix is a such a cute lil bugger. w Demetrius is...is... nom.

I hope Luciano gets his paedophile creepy ass slaughtered. D

ANYHOS. Great chapter. :D
7/20/2009 c8 1LunaSerena
sometimes its hard to follow whos thoughts and feeling i am reading, but i'm still enjoying myself
7/20/2009 c8 Faiyaa
I was like, "Aw." when Demetrius pulled Phoenix's seat out. What a cute moment because I could picture it. Omg Byron knows...hm..FINALLY. And now Phoenix knows but can he really live his life when he still lives in fear of his evil father? HM.
7/19/2009 c7 LunaSerena
hey hey ive been reading ur story each time u post it..i enjoy it very much and i am enjoying the plot. i'm nervous about what will happen! and i am a little confused but then how else would i be at this point in the story. dont forget to proofread
7/19/2009 c7 Faiyaa
Byron is attracted to Phoenix I wonder how he'll take it once he finds out Demetrius and Phoenix are mates. Uhh I don't like Melaina and Koly they are some bad apples. I wonder why Amaraclys is thinking, "No..it couldn't be" ? I feel so bad for Phoenix and I had a lot more to say when I was reading it but I kind of forgot. This story is awesome and I love that you update every day.
7/18/2009 c6 Faiyaa
First off, I would like to say I love you for replying to all my reviews. Then, I would like to say I don't like Cassie. even though she has my nickname I don't like female characters in yaoi. I don't know why. Anyway, Demetri and Phoenix are so cute together. I can't wait until Luciano returns because he'll bring a lot of drama.
7/17/2009 c5 koerle
"“She has no reason to. I'm legally an adult now, sex is legal.” Byron shot his father a grin."

Who said anything about sex? Or was that his intention with Phoenix in the first place?

The mate-thing with Vampires confuses me.

He stalled when the scent hit him. Blood, that was as rich as wine, invaded his senses. Eyes widening dramatically, Demetrius Venois suddenly found himself standing right before his mate. His canines threatened to unsheathe themselves.

“Byron, pull the curtains properly,” he ordered thickly, not trusting himself to even move at the moment. His fists clenched, struggling to get hold of himself. Every part of him was straining to go to his mate and feed off that gorgeous blood.

Demetrius was worried that Phoenix would be his sons mate, but now he finds out that the boy is his mate?

How does that work? Is it a sexual interest? A romantical? Is is a once-in-a-lifetime connection? And if that's the case, how did that go between him and Byrons mom?

By the way: clever story title!
7/17/2009 c4 koerle
Great chapter, again.

I wonder if there is a special reason for the headmistress for being so protecrive over Phoenix? It feels a lit more than the average worrying to me.

The first time you've introduced Byron he came across as a bad ass. Like the guy at the top of the food chain. I somehow expected him to be more relucted to engage in contact. But he's really trying to get to know Phoenix, and he's nice from the first moment he's introduced as his new roommate.

Why doesn't Phoenix want to ask any questions about Vampires? Was his dad/master having a beef with vampires?

When Demetrius observes his son and Phoenix enter the cafetaria he thinks Phoenix was placed to get close to him. Is he thinking the headmistress uses his son tho get him to teach the boy?

I'm a little confused about this scene:

"Bravely, he pushed forward through the crowd with his mind and touched Phoenix's. Abruptly, he was mentally dragged in. It felt like someone had just submerged him in water and all he could see was the blonde.

Eyes shot towards him, away from Byron. “What happened?”

The dark haired man heard the voice in his head and was shocked to the core. The two males stared at each other, their connection still strong. Demetrius was trying desperately not to reply but to cut the bond. Suddenly, it all disappeared when Byron tapped Phoenix's shoulder, causing the boy to turn.

What the hell had just happened?

He had an average mind power over anyone that didn't have strong mental blocks up, not nearly as powerful as Luciano was. Never had it ever opened up a telepathic connection in all these years. Phoenix was oblivious to his gift so his power should not reach out to his. He was split. The teacher in him wanted to explore this new finding but the male in him was frightened of what that might do."

He walked towards his son and Phoenix and gets "sucked" into the boys mind?

This: "He had an average mind power over anyone that didn't have strong mental blocks up, not nearly as powerful as Luciano was." looks like and observation by Demetrius, but this observation confuses me: "Never had it ever opened up a telepathic connection in all these years. Phoenix was oblivious to his gift so his power should not reach out to his. He was split"

Is D. taling about himself never opening a telepatic connection before, and now getting "sucked" in to do so?

Like D. I am split ;)
7/17/2009 c5 Faiyaa
Demetrius AND Phoenix are mates! I think I cracked the code. Byron is a sweetheart and I don't like Mrs Jeeves for some reason. ha ha ha update son.
7/17/2009 c3 koerle
Why doesn't Demetrius want to teach him? Is there history there? Or is he just a grumpy guy?

His son does seem nixe enough.
7/17/2009 c2 koerle
His father was the master? Somehow I did't see that one coming...

Why does his skin burn in the sun? I guess that not seeing any sun your whole life does not have that effect...

Great story so far.
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