
7/17/2009 c1 koerle
Interesting prologue. This really starts the story with a lot of information. But a lot of things are kept vague, thus sparking my interest even more. Like: who's his master, who freed him and who's time is almost up...
Interesting prologue. This really starts the story with a lot of information. But a lot of things are kept vague, thus sparking my interest even more. Like: who's his master, who freed him and who's time is almost up...
7/16/2009 c4 Faiyaa
I love you because most authors would be like "OMG BYRON AND PHOENIX ARE MATES" But even though Byron is conviced Phoenix isn't I can't help but be like...maybe they are? UPDATE SOON. PLEASE.
I love you because most authors would be like "OMG BYRON AND PHOENIX ARE MATES" But even though Byron is conviced Phoenix isn't I can't help but be like...maybe they are? UPDATE SOON. PLEASE.
7/15/2009 c3 Faiyaa
I really like this story because i've never read a story like this.I tend to not like the supernatural fanfic because people usually don't write them write or come up with a stupid. People also try to complicate matters by trying to create their own world as if they are J.K. Rowling. I usually just skim through chapters but I read and reread every detail. I like this story please update very soon.
I really like this story because i've never read a story like this.I tend to not like the supernatural fanfic because people usually don't write them write or come up with a stupid. People also try to complicate matters by trying to create their own world as if they are J.K. Rowling. I usually just skim through chapters but I read and reread every detail. I like this story please update very soon.
7/13/2009 c3 kay
so far i'm very interested in your story, i'm curious to see how it progresses especially with a character as damaged as phoenix. part of me wants him to recover quickly but i know that would be entirely unrealistic as he'll obviously be severely messed up ... all his life. anywho, very curious to see what happens next and hoping for a quick update!
so far i'm very interested in your story, i'm curious to see how it progresses especially with a character as damaged as phoenix. part of me wants him to recover quickly but i know that would be entirely unrealistic as he'll obviously be severely messed up ... all his life. anywho, very curious to see what happens next and hoping for a quick update!
7/12/2009 c2 Jordan
Very interesting...I like this story so far, and I'd like to read more of it to see how the plot developes. Please continue writing! :)
Very interesting...I like this story so far, and I'd like to read more of it to see how the plot developes. Please continue writing! :)