
10/2/2009 c1 Brenda Agaro
Aww...these are adorable. I'm actually impressed at the poem in the end. Thanks for sharing!
Oh, and you don't have to review back. :-)
Aww...these are adorable. I'm actually impressed at the poem in the end. Thanks for sharing!
Oh, and you don't have to review back. :-)
7/14/2009 c1
19S. M. Saves
Awe! This is so cute! Now your 6-year-old writing is immortalized forever because it was posted on Fictionpress. :) Yay!

Awe! This is so cute! Now your 6-year-old writing is immortalized forever because it was posted on Fictionpress. :) Yay!
7/13/2009 c1
2ShockingReality
This was cute. :)
it's interesting to see the way our minds worked when we were kids. I love going back and reading my old diaries, old stories that I wrote.
Thanks for this...it really made me smile

This was cute. :)
it's interesting to see the way our minds worked when we were kids. I love going back and reading my old diaries, old stories that I wrote.
Thanks for this...it really made me smile
7/12/2009 c1
82Solemn Coyote
This is one of the most awesomely poignant things I’ve seen on this site. The bit about birds, in particular, strikes me pretty hard. I’d almost like to use it as a jumping off point for story of my own, with permission of course.
I can’t exactly review this the way I would almost anything else here. It’s not looking for criticism. Instead, the best I can do is say that I’m glad you posted it.
Cheers,
-SC

This is one of the most awesomely poignant things I’ve seen on this site. The bit about birds, in particular, strikes me pretty hard. I’d almost like to use it as a jumping off point for story of my own, with permission of course.
I can’t exactly review this the way I would almost anything else here. It’s not looking for criticism. Instead, the best I can do is say that I’m glad you posted it.
Cheers,
-SC