for Just Because7/19/2012 c1 Guest
awwww...so sweet 3
awwww...so sweet 3
5/27/2012 c1 almacubana
Amazing. Thank you for sharing.
It's 4:30 am and I needed a reason to smile. Great job :-)
Amazing. Thank you for sharing.
It's 4:30 am and I needed a reason to smile. Great job :-)
11/17/2011 c1 Sara
ok, so my roommate has told me that "you're sitting there with this stupid grin on your face, staring at your computer screen, either you're reading something incredibly romantic and sweet or you're staring at a picture of puppies. which is it?" lol, i just thought that was funny. Anyway, so yeah, i loved all of these and i wish i had a boyfriend like this!
ok, so my roommate has told me that "you're sitting there with this stupid grin on your face, staring at your computer screen, either you're reading something incredibly romantic and sweet or you're staring at a picture of puppies. which is it?" lol, i just thought that was funny. Anyway, so yeah, i loved all of these and i wish i had a boyfriend like this!
8/18/2011 c1 Rosedreamer101
AWWWW that was so cute and cheesy and adorable ! gosshh, you're just this amazing talent writer, arent you? :P
AWWWW that was so cute and cheesy and adorable ! gosshh, you're just this amazing talent writer, arent you? :P
7/15/2011 c1 
1DofD
AWWWWW! See there ya go again. Making my college English degree go bye bye and replacing it with an elementary vocabulary.
1DofDAWWWWW! See there ya go again. Making my college English degree go bye bye and replacing it with an elementary vocabulary.
5/22/2011 c1 15Cheryl White
Hihihihihihihihihihihihihihi. I can't stop gigglinggg. :" =)) Loved it!
You are amazing. :))
15Cheryl WhiteHihihihihihihihihihihihihihi. I can't stop gigglinggg. :" =)) Loved it!
You are amazing. :))
4/15/2011 c1 neverlands
This is the funniest thing I've read in a long time. I love the humor and romance incorporated in this story. Grammar was good; I didn't see any mistakes as I was reading.
I loved the way you just made most this in dialogue form. Otherwise, the parts that really mattered would have been overshadowed by an ample amount of unnecessary jargon.
All in all, this is amazing. I LOVE THIS TO PIECES.
Good luck with both life and writing,
Dame
P.S. The two characters here are British, right?
This is the funniest thing I've read in a long time. I love the humor and romance incorporated in this story. Grammar was good; I didn't see any mistakes as I was reading.
I loved the way you just made most this in dialogue form. Otherwise, the parts that really mattered would have been overshadowed by an ample amount of unnecessary jargon.
All in all, this is amazing. I LOVE THIS TO PIECES.
Good luck with both life and writing,
Dame
P.S. The two characters here are British, right?
2/26/2011 c1 25Kyllex
Ah. So freaking cute.
So at first I didn't like the way this was written, like it was a play or something, but I got used to it. Having all dialogue is interesting.
And I really like these characters. They're hilarious! The guy is adorable. So yeah, good job! I liked it!
25KyllexAh. So freaking cute.
So at first I didn't like the way this was written, like it was a play or something, but I got used to it. Having all dialogue is interesting.
And I really like these characters. They're hilarious! The guy is adorable. So yeah, good job! I liked it!
12/4/2010 c1 8urtenshii
"But you are perfect . . ." -under breath- "For me."
"Because even back then, you meant everything to me. And you have to know, I'll always come back for you."
"It was a sacrifice I was willing to make." "Along with sacrificing your pride?" "It was worth it – just to see you smile."
"I'm not. But where you're concerned, I do a lot of crazy stuff."
"Why bother to keep all this?"
"So that no matter what happens, I'll always remember."
"Baby, I'd move heaven and earth just to be with you."
-grins- "Honestly, I'm two seconds from leaving and then you go all cheesy on me."
"Cheese is good. I like cheese. My favourite's cheddar."
-rolls eyes- "Funny."
"I know. I'm hilarious."
"But why would you do all this, for me?"
-he smiles-
"Just because I love you."
Why am I smiling by myself on my room looking so inlove it's as if my prince charming has come down?
Just Because I read your story :)
Nice work !
Keep writing !
8urtenshii"But you are perfect . . ." -under breath- "For me."
"Because even back then, you meant everything to me. And you have to know, I'll always come back for you."
"It was a sacrifice I was willing to make." "Along with sacrificing your pride?" "It was worth it – just to see you smile."
"I'm not. But where you're concerned, I do a lot of crazy stuff."
"Why bother to keep all this?"
"So that no matter what happens, I'll always remember."
"Baby, I'd move heaven and earth just to be with you."
-grins- "Honestly, I'm two seconds from leaving and then you go all cheesy on me."
"Cheese is good. I like cheese. My favourite's cheddar."
-rolls eyes- "Funny."
"I know. I'm hilarious."
"But why would you do all this, for me?"
-he smiles-
"Just because I love you."
Why am I smiling by myself on my room looking so inlove it's as if my prince charming has come down?
Just Because I read your story :)
Nice work !
Keep writing !
10/31/2010 c1 SometimesG
good writing style... you pretty much left it to us readers on who is saying what... good work!
good writing style... you pretty much left it to us readers on who is saying what... good work!