for Just Because9/18/2010 c1 Ashweezie
aw...thats so cute! any personal experience? lol!
good luck!
Keep writing ;)
aw...thats so cute! any personal experience? lol!
good luck!
Keep writing ;)
6/17/2010 c1 Vanessa
Amazing! I don't know which of your stories I like best, but I like them all.
Amazing! I don't know which of your stories I like best, but I like them all.
5/6/2010 c1 
2HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC
I love on the Jelicoe Road, actually, come to think of it, I love all Mellina Marchetta novels, Finnikin is amazing too :)
Back to your story :P
So very very sweet:)
You make me wanna SHOUT! Put my hands up and SHOUT! LOL
Nah it's just one of those when you read it you get all tingly and jumpy and ask where the bloody hell is my one.!. :P
Great job
2HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiCI love on the Jelicoe Road, actually, come to think of it, I love all Mellina Marchetta novels, Finnikin is amazing too :)
Back to your story :P
So very very sweet:)
You make me wanna SHOUT! Put my hands up and SHOUT! LOL
Nah it's just one of those when you read it you get all tingly and jumpy and ask where the bloody hell is my one.!. :P
Great job
5/2/2010 c1 CANADAEH
OH MY GOD. THE CUTEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ.
this story has just got me swooning. gosh, the main male character sounds like a dream come true. -insert more swooning-
AHAHA. keep writing! you're an awesome writer!
way to pull on the heart strings eh :P
OH MY GOD. THE CUTEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ.
this story has just got me swooning. gosh, the main male character sounds like a dream come true. -insert more swooning-
AHAHA. keep writing! you're an awesome writer!
way to pull on the heart strings eh :P
4/24/2010 c1 chocoholic dreamer
okay... i can't remove this stupid grin on my face right now. this one-shot makes me go "why is it over? it's too good to be over!"
of all your works (which are all totally awesome), this is my favorite. and god, i would kill to have a boyfriend like that. LOL. love the story...
and i'm having a feeling i'm already blabbering so i'll shut up now.
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okay... i can't remove this stupid grin on my face right now. this one-shot makes me go "why is it over? it's too good to be over!"
of all your works (which are all totally awesome), this is my favorite. and god, i would kill to have a boyfriend like that. LOL. love the story...
and i'm having a feeling i'm already blabbering so i'll shut up now.
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4/3/2010 c1 xoxlaughformexox
I love how quirky/funny your characters are! It's like they're real people that you can relate too. [Big fan of your one shots-makes your heart cry, but don't have to wait for them updates(; ]
I love how quirky/funny your characters are! It's like they're real people that you can relate too. [Big fan of your one shots-makes your heart cry, but don't have to wait for them updates(; ]
3/23/2010 c1 5CuriousContradiction
:)
One-shots tend to be overly cheesy and dramatic, but I think this whole one-shot deal worked for you. It definitely was the kind that made me go "Aw" (but in my head because I'm a closet romantic) and left me with a stupid grin on my face (it's still there).
I liked that there weren't names. It makes it more... relatable, I guess. It's almost more personal in that these two people could be anyone. I also like that this one-shot was all in dialogue. That takes skill! I'm jealous of your conversational skills. If only I had your ability to make it all sound sweet without being sappy, funny without being forced... haha. How do you do it?
Anyway, enough of my rambling. Great work. (:
5CuriousContradiction:)
One-shots tend to be overly cheesy and dramatic, but I think this whole one-shot deal worked for you. It definitely was the kind that made me go "Aw" (but in my head because I'm a closet romantic) and left me with a stupid grin on my face (it's still there).
I liked that there weren't names. It makes it more... relatable, I guess. It's almost more personal in that these two people could be anyone. I also like that this one-shot was all in dialogue. That takes skill! I'm jealous of your conversational skills. If only I had your ability to make it all sound sweet without being sappy, funny without being forced... haha. How do you do it?
Anyway, enough of my rambling. Great work. (:
12/28/2009 c1 2elma
that was so ideal. I believe in happy endings too but by like believing this could ever happen to anyone, ever happen to me... seems to be pushing it a little LOL. I've grown up a bit and I suppose I won't meet my guy in high school. -sigh-
Btw I think it's amazing how you managed to keep it all dialogue yet give the characters distinct personalities, put them in distinct places and give this a distinct storyline! Well done!
2elmathat was so ideal. I believe in happy endings too but by like believing this could ever happen to anyone, ever happen to me... seems to be pushing it a little LOL. I've grown up a bit and I suppose I won't meet my guy in high school. -sigh-
Btw I think it's amazing how you managed to keep it all dialogue yet give the characters distinct personalities, put them in distinct places and give this a distinct storyline! Well done!
12/25/2009 c1 11Jessiquie
This is absoutely breath taking! Its so adorable and sweet and romantic and aw. Just the thing one wants to read this time of year too!
I Do have one question though. Where is it set? Your profile page says you're Australian, so my first thought when I started reading this was it was set in Australia. But we don't have proms here, Formals yes, Proms not so much. Then for the rest of the piece I thought it was set in America, but then the ending says they where flying half way around the world to New York... so I'm a touch confused. It's obviously nothing major, I was just wondering is all, I mean I know you can use the Prom to mean the same thing (which they practically are) and it makes it easier with a mainly American readership on this site, but yeah I was just wondering and now I'm rambelling. Sorry!
It was amazingly written. Aww I just loved it! No wonder you come so highly recommended.
11JessiquieThis is absoutely breath taking! Its so adorable and sweet and romantic and aw. Just the thing one wants to read this time of year too!
I Do have one question though. Where is it set? Your profile page says you're Australian, so my first thought when I started reading this was it was set in Australia. But we don't have proms here, Formals yes, Proms not so much. Then for the rest of the piece I thought it was set in America, but then the ending says they where flying half way around the world to New York... so I'm a touch confused. It's obviously nothing major, I was just wondering is all, I mean I know you can use the Prom to mean the same thing (which they practically are) and it makes it easier with a mainly American readership on this site, but yeah I was just wondering and now I'm rambelling. Sorry!
It was amazingly written. Aww I just loved it! No wonder you come so highly recommended.
11/29/2009 c1 1EasilyDamaged
Aw that was truly adorable! It's nice to read this cheesy stuff sometimes, since I absolutely love it. Shh, it's a guilty pleasure of mine ;) The dialogue is fantastic btw. Love/hate couples are always the best. These two sound just like one of my favorite TV couples, only they never got together. Yeah, just my luck :p
1EasilyDamagedAw that was truly adorable! It's nice to read this cheesy stuff sometimes, since I absolutely love it. Shh, it's a guilty pleasure of mine ;) The dialogue is fantastic btw. Love/hate couples are always the best. These two sound just like one of my favorite TV couples, only they never got together. Yeah, just my luck :p