10/3/2009 c1 Fleurs
Yay yay yay! I love this! So sweet. And I adore your last line! It was perfect for the story. I don't usually find last lines I like, so this is verry good. I have this huge smile on my face that I just can't seem to wipe off. Eek- that happy ending is infectious... if that's the right way to phrase it. I really love the dialogue and stuff. It's like you didn't really need anything else to make your story work. One of the best one-shots I've read since the days I spent lurking around on fp anonymously. Awesome job XD
Yay yay yay! I love this! So sweet. And I adore your last line! It was perfect for the story. I don't usually find last lines I like, so this is verry good. I have this huge smile on my face that I just can't seem to wipe off. Eek- that happy ending is infectious... if that's the right way to phrase it. I really love the dialogue and stuff. It's like you didn't really need anything else to make your story work. One of the best one-shots I've read since the days I spent lurking around on fp anonymously. Awesome job XD
8/18/2009 c1 Inflomora
I loved it! It was sweet, funny and absolutely, gorgeously, amazingly well-written. :)
I loved it! It was sweet, funny and absolutely, gorgeously, amazingly well-written. :)
8/17/2009 c1 2xxXNightsareDaysXxx
I love this. Gosh, it's great! Awesome!
He-she one-shots are great!
I wish...
I love this. Gosh, it's great! Awesome!
He-she one-shots are great!
I wish...
8/12/2009 c1 S1mba
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8/1/2009 c1 6thelittleroad
I love how you've written this. How it's dialogue and nothing else. Brilliant concept that needs to be done more often, I think. Oh, and 'On The Jellicoe Road' was a lovely story. The quote in the Summary is excellent.
I love how you've written this. How it's dialogue and nothing else. Brilliant concept that needs to be done more often, I think. Oh, and 'On The Jellicoe Road' was a lovely story. The quote in the Summary is excellent.