for a lost glove's partner7/15/2009 c1 
70rolliepollie44
Mm, I don't know if you can get much more perfect. The short lines are seemingly choppy but actually flow quite smoothly throughout the peice, and you create a mysterious imagery that doesn't give you an exact picture but just a short swirl of it.
You had lovely word choice, and I really liked just the quick little lines that brought out the story in the poem. Seriously, this is beautiful. :)
rolliepollie44
70rolliepollie44Mm, I don't know if you can get much more perfect. The short lines are seemingly choppy but actually flow quite smoothly throughout the peice, and you create a mysterious imagery that doesn't give you an exact picture but just a short swirl of it.
You had lovely word choice, and I really liked just the quick little lines that brought out the story in the poem. Seriously, this is beautiful. :)
rolliepollie44
7/15/2009 c1 1girl like cheshire
that is such a clever idea!
but on to the review ;)
love the twist you have put onto this. instead of being simply lost the glove is escaping (and this line-"were you escaping/ or suicidal?" took it three steps over the top of awesome, btw).
your descriptions are picturesque and perfect, the questions you pose are interesting and unique. def. should submit this.
1girl like cheshirethat is such a clever idea!
but on to the review ;)
love the twist you have put onto this. instead of being simply lost the glove is escaping (and this line-"were you escaping/ or suicidal?" took it three steps over the top of awesome, btw).
your descriptions are picturesque and perfect, the questions you pose are interesting and unique. def. should submit this.