for Canned Hope8/7/2009 c1 
612simpleplan13
I didn't like the repetition of today, it just seemed unneccessary. I also didn't like the rhyme scheme. It stopped halfway through. I did like the ending, it was quite funny and a cute idea.
PS If you're bored check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (links in my profile).
612simpleplan13I didn't like the repetition of today, it just seemed unneccessary. I also didn't like the rhyme scheme. It stopped halfway through. I did like the ending, it was quite funny and a cute idea.
PS If you're bored check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (links in my profile).
7/20/2009 c1 95XxXKristie MarieXxX
Yes Hope and Faith. I've been here... those insperational taps don't work. I've listened for a few b4. Keep hoping and i'm sure you'll find it. Awesome poem.
95XxXKristie MarieXxXYes Hope and Faith. I've been here... those insperational taps don't work. I've listened for a few b4. Keep hoping and i'm sure you'll find it. Awesome poem.