for The Worriers8/7/2009 c1 
612simpleplan13
Thanks for your review awhile back, sorry it took me so long
to return the favor.
"Like how much I love you instead of go away.".. the second half of that seemed a bit like a forced rhyme
I like the rhyme with those last two lines, definitely unique. I also like the piece. I can totally relate being a worrier myself and I like how you used common sayings nicely and without it seeming cliched.
PS If you're bored check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (links in my profile).
612simpleplan13Thanks for your review awhile back, sorry it took me so long
to return the favor.
"Like how much I love you instead of go away.".. the second half of that seemed a bit like a forced rhyme
I like the rhyme with those last two lines, definitely unique. I also like the piece. I can totally relate being a worrier myself and I like how you used common sayings nicely and without it seeming cliched.
PS If you're bored check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (links in my profile).
7/20/2009 c1 95XxXKristie MarieXxX
Very nicely written. I can relate and understand this completly. Thanks for adding me to your favorite authors list. Hopefully I review some of my work ^_^ keep up the great work
Xkristie MarieX
95XxXKristie MarieXxXVery nicely written. I can relate and understand this completly. Thanks for adding me to your favorite authors list. Hopefully I review some of my work ^_^ keep up the great work
Xkristie MarieX