for Just Because6/11/2021 c35 Guest
I absolutely loved it! Wow, I can't believe how old this story is. You probably won't see this, but just in case: You are an amazing author!
I absolutely loved it! Wow, I can't believe how old this story is. You probably won't see this, but just in case: You are an amazing author!
4/24/2020 c11 Guest
Your writing and analysis of gay people in general seems really shallow like who would realistically try and force someone to come out the closet or take jabs at them for it because win this context, Parker and Alex have only just become somewhat friendly with eat other they’re not close enough for that kid of thing. Parker isn’t entitles to tell Alex to come out the closet just because he’s also gay like what the fuck
Your writing and analysis of gay people in general seems really shallow like who would realistically try and force someone to come out the closet or take jabs at them for it because win this context, Parker and Alex have only just become somewhat friendly with eat other they’re not close enough for that kid of thing. Parker isn’t entitles to tell Alex to come out the closet just because he’s also gay like what the fuck
4/24/2020 c10 Guest
I really hate how Parker is almost obsessed with Alex’s looks like we get it the guy is hot but he also physically and verbally abused you - the transition from being an abused victim to suddenly being thirsty for the guy seems too unrealistic and abrupt. Without all the thirsty comments and if you had them become friends first, their relationship would have been much more realistic and whole
I really hate how Parker is almost obsessed with Alex’s looks like we get it the guy is hot but he also physically and verbally abused you - the transition from being an abused victim to suddenly being thirsty for the guy seems too unrealistic and abrupt. Without all the thirsty comments and if you had them become friends first, their relationship would have been much more realistic and whole
9/28/2018 c23 Guest
Honestly. I’m not mad at Cam. I’m mad at Parker putting all of the blame on Cam as if he didn’t kiss cam back. In fact, Parker doesn’t blame for anything. Calling Cam creepy for being worried about him, totally ignoring that he used to go on and on about how horrible Alex was to him. Why is Cam suddenly the crazy one? Why is Cam “creepy” but not Anyone else? Why did Alex get a pass with Marissa but Cam still gets crap for what he did to Parker? Ugh. These characters are all ridiculous. None of them stick to one personality. It’s confusing.
Honestly. I’m not mad at Cam. I’m mad at Parker putting all of the blame on Cam as if he didn’t kiss cam back. In fact, Parker doesn’t blame for anything. Calling Cam creepy for being worried about him, totally ignoring that he used to go on and on about how horrible Alex was to him. Why is Cam suddenly the crazy one? Why is Cam “creepy” but not Anyone else? Why did Alex get a pass with Marissa but Cam still gets crap for what he did to Parker? Ugh. These characters are all ridiculous. None of them stick to one personality. It’s confusing.
7/6/2017 c35 
5MostlyAlexLeigh
Amazing, fantastic story that I absolutely adored. Thank you so much for writing it and publishing it so we can all read. The writing was fantastic, and Parker is such a cute and sassy character. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
5MostlyAlexLeighAmazing, fantastic story that I absolutely adored. Thank you so much for writing it and publishing it so we can all read. The writing was fantastic, and Parker is such a cute and sassy character. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
7/5/2017 c1 MostlyAlexLeigh
You had me at "He grins maliciously- I know, big word for me-". Wonderful writing so far! :)
You had me at "He grins maliciously- I know, big word for me-". Wonderful writing so far! :)
3/25/2017 c35 4kanyon01
This was so amazing! Thank you for taking the time to actually gift us all with this perfect story. I appreciate this story. Parker and Alex are literally my gay children, and their development from fighty to talky friendy to love is the best ever. I died while reading this story it's honestly so amazing. Great work :))))
4kanyon01This was so amazing! Thank you for taking the time to actually gift us all with this perfect story. I appreciate this story. Parker and Alex are literally my gay children, and their development from fighty to talky friendy to love is the best ever. I died while reading this story it's honestly so amazing. Great work :))))
2/18/2017 c1 Shiina
Ugh! This is going to be a classic bullyxvictim romance isn't it? I don't get why people like the cliché 'hot asshole' so much, I would punch the guy. But I'm going to give this a chance. The writing is good after all. Also Cam is a little bitch, I hope Parker gets revenge on him.
Ugh! This is going to be a classic bullyxvictim romance isn't it? I don't get why people like the cliché 'hot asshole' so much, I would punch the guy. But I'm going to give this a chance. The writing is good after all. Also Cam is a little bitch, I hope Parker gets revenge on him.
9/10/2016 c4 Heartbroken
How dare you! My heart broke and got stomped on by a herd of zebras in this chapter!
How dare you! My heart broke and got stomped on by a herd of zebras in this chapter!
8/4/2016 c35 noyaroo
Binged through this HARD yesterday until midnight. Why not leave a review for a 6yr old story? lmao.
Anyway, this was pretty fun and engaging. There was so much high school drama that it seriously took me back. Teenagers are some dumb creatures. The characters were really fun to read about and even though Alex was an ass in the beginning, I think his character turned out /really/ well. There was some nice character development and progression, for most of them anyway. This also made me fairly nostalgic (Author helped a lot, all those mentions of those bands... ah man.)
Of course there was some flaws, but I'm not going to bother pointing them all out now lol. Only thing that bothered me were the casual rape jokes, but I've told a lot of those as a teenager _
Anyway 9/10 A SMUT WAS GUD.
Binged through this HARD yesterday until midnight. Why not leave a review for a 6yr old story? lmao.
Anyway, this was pretty fun and engaging. There was so much high school drama that it seriously took me back. Teenagers are some dumb creatures. The characters were really fun to read about and even though Alex was an ass in the beginning, I think his character turned out /really/ well. There was some nice character development and progression, for most of them anyway. This also made me fairly nostalgic (Author helped a lot, all those mentions of those bands... ah man.)
Of course there was some flaws, but I'm not going to bother pointing them all out now lol. Only thing that bothered me were the casual rape jokes, but I've told a lot of those as a teenager _
Anyway 9/10 A SMUT WAS GUD.
5/20/2016 c35 3Fryvi
So, I stumbled over this, and I read it, and I really liked it
Alex and Parker are such a cute couple! And I like your writing.
Thanks!
3FryviSo, I stumbled over this, and I read it, and I really liked it
Alex and Parker are such a cute couple! And I like your writing.
Thanks!
3/2/2016 c34 nrlyne13
Well done! You effectively captured the two types of homophobic people there are. The one who can't change and the one who can! I lost love, love, love this story!
Well done! You effectively captured the two types of homophobic people there are. The one who can't change and the one who can! I lost love, love, love this story!
2/4/2016 c11 4ImmanenceEnsured
There is no 'guy' and 'girl' in a gay relationship, though. Just two guys.
4ImmanenceEnsuredThere is no 'guy' and 'girl' in a gay relationship, though. Just two guys.