for Just Because2/4/2016 c6 
4ImmanenceEnsured
‘Fucking females. Why are they so stupid? Sometimes I wish I went to an all-boys school so I wouldn’t have to deal with this shit.’
This is super offensive, for obvious reasons. 1 He’s the one being a jerk, so he should take responsibility and not be surprised when people react accordingly. 2 He can’t be so stupid as to not realize that most girls don’t want to JUST sleep around, so why is he pretending to be, then calls Them stupid? Why is he blaming the victim? Sorry, but this is a problematic piece of writing right here, no matter how appealing of a character Alex might be. Just had to say this, cause it’s not cool. Love the story, though.
4ImmanenceEnsured‘Fucking females. Why are they so stupid? Sometimes I wish I went to an all-boys school so I wouldn’t have to deal with this shit.’
This is super offensive, for obvious reasons. 1 He’s the one being a jerk, so he should take responsibility and not be surprised when people react accordingly. 2 He can’t be so stupid as to not realize that most girls don’t want to JUST sleep around, so why is he pretending to be, then calls Them stupid? Why is he blaming the victim? Sorry, but this is a problematic piece of writing right here, no matter how appealing of a character Alex might be. Just had to say this, cause it’s not cool. Love the story, though.
12/3/2015 c35 PiyoPuri
awwwwwwwwwwwwww of my gosh so sad! nyah..._ sob sob, so beautiful! read it through to the very end. 5 hours straight, baby. so hot...
awwwwwwwwwwwwww of my gosh so sad! nyah..._ sob sob, so beautiful! read it through to the very end. 5 hours straight, baby. so hot...
9/30/2015 c35 2Ri-chan27
Omg, I fell in love with this! So much that in the middle of the fic, I texted my friend and was like "Dude, dude, dude, DUDE, check this shit out man. It is the bomdiggity of awesomeness and yaoiness and superness and dramaness and holyshitness combined." and she was like "Woah!"
Seriously though, this was awesome (weird and like nooo for when Parkie topped cause he's too much of a cutie to me for that) but loved when Park tried to sneak a feel of Alex's muscles when he could XD Awesomeness.
And I can't wait for the sequel! AHhhhhhh! I will be (barely) waiting eagerly for it!
Thanks so much for this fic and I love you for it!
Gonna check out some of your other fics now, yay!
2Ri-chan27Omg, I fell in love with this! So much that in the middle of the fic, I texted my friend and was like "Dude, dude, dude, DUDE, check this shit out man. It is the bomdiggity of awesomeness and yaoiness and superness and dramaness and holyshitness combined." and she was like "Woah!"
Seriously though, this was awesome (weird and like nooo for when Parkie topped cause he's too much of a cutie to me for that) but loved when Park tried to sneak a feel of Alex's muscles when he could XD Awesomeness.
And I can't wait for the sequel! AHhhhhhh! I will be (barely) waiting eagerly for it!
Thanks so much for this fic and I love you for it!
Gonna check out some of your other fics now, yay!
9/11/2015 c35 20Mydaya
Hello there!
I really like your story ! It was so cute and well written ! I like when you describe them in their everyday life. I'm used to drama story and yours is just almost always happy !
I'm not fond of the "boy buy everything and the 'girl' just follow" stereotype so I don't really like this part of their relation. Even when Parker is with Cooper and he has the feeling to do the "boy"... However it's the only point that I don't like. I like everything else :)
20MydayaHello there!
I really like your story ! It was so cute and well written ! I like when you describe them in their everyday life. I'm used to drama story and yours is just almost always happy !
I'm not fond of the "boy buy everything and the 'girl' just follow" stereotype so I don't really like this part of their relation. Even when Parker is with Cooper and he has the feeling to do the "boy"... However it's the only point that I don't like. I like everything else :)
8/26/2015 c27 Guest
I honestly love this story I just have one issue. I don't know if it's a part of their character or what but some times Alex and Parker talk about being gay, bi, and, in this chapter, asexual, as something that you can become or change to. It's not. It's a part of a person's identity. You can accept it or come out or even realize that part of your identity but implying that it's a decision to be anything on the LGBTQ spectrum can read very offensively. It lends to the argument of "why don't they just chose to be straight?" I know you definitely don't mean it that way so if you find yourself editing this I highly recommend you change it. Especially since Parker is looking to be president of GSA he'd know what is appropriate to say.
I honestly love this story I just have one issue. I don't know if it's a part of their character or what but some times Alex and Parker talk about being gay, bi, and, in this chapter, asexual, as something that you can become or change to. It's not. It's a part of a person's identity. You can accept it or come out or even realize that part of your identity but implying that it's a decision to be anything on the LGBTQ spectrum can read very offensively. It lends to the argument of "why don't they just chose to be straight?" I know you definitely don't mean it that way so if you find yourself editing this I highly recommend you change it. Especially since Parker is looking to be president of GSA he'd know what is appropriate to say.
7/16/2015 c10 xPencilsCamerasx
Um... speaking from experience here- being bi is NOT an UNCERTAINTY! That's kind of offensive.
But I still love this story, so I guess... whatever.
Um... speaking from experience here- being bi is NOT an UNCERTAINTY! That's kind of offensive.
But I still love this story, so I guess... whatever.
5/31/2015 c8 Anna
I just had to comment on this story because it has been a really weird experience for me. Firstly, I didn't think much about the fact that it was written i 2009. That's not too long ago, right? Wrong. Black, straightened hair for boys. All Time Low. Actual songs as ring tones. It seems like a lifetime ago! I'm getting oooold. It's so weird when stories and movies gets so old that it feels nostalgic, when things you remember starts to be something which happened "a while ago"... Actually, Alex and Parker would be my age today! Wow. Now I'm going to put on some All Time Low and cry over my lost youth. Thanks for a great story!
I just had to comment on this story because it has been a really weird experience for me. Firstly, I didn't think much about the fact that it was written i 2009. That's not too long ago, right? Wrong. Black, straightened hair for boys. All Time Low. Actual songs as ring tones. It seems like a lifetime ago! I'm getting oooold. It's so weird when stories and movies gets so old that it feels nostalgic, when things you remember starts to be something which happened "a while ago"... Actually, Alex and Parker would be my age today! Wow. Now I'm going to put on some All Time Low and cry over my lost youth. Thanks for a great story!
4/4/2015 c21 Guest
I'd wish cam got smashed by satellite already. Along with his boyfriend travis when having sex. Yes, that'd be entertaining and satisfying
I'd wish cam got smashed by satellite already. Along with his boyfriend travis when having sex. Yes, that'd be entertaining and satisfying
4/4/2015 c14 Guest
Even though it's slash, I still feel insecure about Alex, its like he's between the thin line between gay or bi. Like he's just mistaking his gayness because he doesn't feel attracted to girls at all and here come the Marissa girl who's VIRGIN who's potentionally has a kind heart and maybe could change alex sexual reference... And parker sometimes change into no-no character into flirty-bitchy-slutty character. If possible there should be 1 more parker zone that's cold and just ignore the world. And I KNEW this fiction is completed but oh well... Overall I love it. The unpredictible story line makes you wonder
Even though it's slash, I still feel insecure about Alex, its like he's between the thin line between gay or bi. Like he's just mistaking his gayness because he doesn't feel attracted to girls at all and here come the Marissa girl who's VIRGIN who's potentionally has a kind heart and maybe could change alex sexual reference... And parker sometimes change into no-no character into flirty-bitchy-slutty character. If possible there should be 1 more parker zone that's cold and just ignore the world. And I KNEW this fiction is completed but oh well... Overall I love it. The unpredictible story line makes you wonder
1/14/2015 c14 cgffytjfydydtd
First of all, I want to say sorry for the mistakes. English isn't my first language and for harsness. I'm not usually like that but it was just to much. You will probably delete the comment and be outraged because I talk and talk but I never wrote a story but I want you to be aware and re-read your story because my review is probably based on some truths. I really tried to keep reading your fic because a lot of people seems to like but now I give up. Your storyline is just so random. Things pop up from nowhere (Parker and Alex's friendship, Alex's sexuality, Alex's love for Jason, Alex's girlfriend, etc.) and the explanations are just... easy. Also, the reactions and the personality of most of the characters are confusing and irrealistic just because you seem ready to do anything to prolong your story that is based on a cliché (average/beautiful gay guy beaten up by straight ou pretending-straight joke guy until they become friends than boyfriends or directly boyfriends). Clichés are super if you can write a good story about it. I don't know your age but some maturity lacks there. You don't have to answer my comment if you want to throw around insults. I will just delete the answer because if you do this, it means you give no attention to my review that will be probably deleted by then.
First of all, I want to say sorry for the mistakes. English isn't my first language and for harsness. I'm not usually like that but it was just to much. You will probably delete the comment and be outraged because I talk and talk but I never wrote a story but I want you to be aware and re-read your story because my review is probably based on some truths. I really tried to keep reading your fic because a lot of people seems to like but now I give up. Your storyline is just so random. Things pop up from nowhere (Parker and Alex's friendship, Alex's sexuality, Alex's love for Jason, Alex's girlfriend, etc.) and the explanations are just... easy. Also, the reactions and the personality of most of the characters are confusing and irrealistic just because you seem ready to do anything to prolong your story that is based on a cliché (average/beautiful gay guy beaten up by straight ou pretending-straight joke guy until they become friends than boyfriends or directly boyfriends). Clichés are super if you can write a good story about it. I don't know your age but some maturity lacks there. You don't have to answer my comment if you want to throw around insults. I will just delete the answer because if you do this, it means you give no attention to my review that will be probably deleted by then.
1/14/2015 c12 cgffytjfydydtd
Chloe'S letter is plain rude to me. She keeps saying that Shane is more loved and taht his mother hates him. I know it isn't what you don't want the readers think about it but... seriously, it's rude.
Chloe'S letter is plain rude to me. She keeps saying that Shane is more loved and taht his mother hates him. I know it isn't what you don't want the readers think about it but... seriously, it's rude.