for Mother Nature10/23/2010 c4 
10Katerzzz
Hey Luke!
Review payback! Wow! Beautiful pieces of poetry! Short, sweet and simple. I think this shows how talented you are as a write as you are able to convey such a beautiful environment in just a few words. All four of these Haiku's are absolutely beautiful and really expressive of you as a writer.
Bril,
Kate =D
P.S. Have updated The Angel Waiting at Hell's Gate if you're interested ;D
10KaterzzzHey Luke!
Review payback! Wow! Beautiful pieces of poetry! Short, sweet and simple. I think this shows how talented you are as a write as you are able to convey such a beautiful environment in just a few words. All four of these Haiku's are absolutely beautiful and really expressive of you as a writer.
Bril,
Kate =D
P.S. Have updated The Angel Waiting at Hell's Gate if you're interested ;D
12/6/2009 c4 15Cassie1521
Ah the moon, as pretty as this haiku. Though I must say Rain was my favorite. I think you should add more to your collection here. There are many aspects of nature you could cover. Amazing collection, your talent astounds me.
15Cassie1521Ah the moon, as pretty as this haiku. Though I must say Rain was my favorite. I think you should add more to your collection here. There are many aspects of nature you could cover. Amazing collection, your talent astounds me.
12/6/2009 c3 Cassie1521
Reminds me of a trip to Maine, gorgeous waterfall there. Once again, beautiful. No critiques.
Reminds me of a trip to Maine, gorgeous waterfall there. Once again, beautiful. No critiques.
12/6/2009 c2 Cassie1521
*sighs* You're an amazingly talented writer. What a beautiful depiction of rain. Wouldn't it be heaven's though? Since it's possessive? May just be me though...
*sighs* You're an amazingly talented writer. What a beautiful depiction of rain. Wouldn't it be heaven's though? Since it's possessive? May just be me though...
12/6/2009 c1 Cassie1521
Beautiful, describes snow and winter weather wonderfully. It's amazing what you can express in just a few words.
Beautiful, describes snow and winter weather wonderfully. It's amazing what you can express in just a few words.
10/17/2009 c1 9Narq
:sigh: I've always loved haikus though I've never mastered it myself.
I lived the falling of the wintry stars, made me think of snow!
Wonderful!
9Narq:sigh: I've always loved haikus though I've never mastered it myself.
I lived the falling of the wintry stars, made me think of snow!
Wonderful!
9/29/2009 c4 9MagicWords
Silent Satellite? Cool! But it has all of those stars to talk to! Just me thinking out loud. I liked these!
9MagicWordsSilent Satellite? Cool! But it has all of those stars to talk to! Just me thinking out loud. I liked these!
9/29/2009 c2 MagicWords
I like your depiction of rain. Grief. I wonder if a stronger word than 'falling' could have been used...
I like your depiction of rain. Grief. I wonder if a stronger word than 'falling' could have been used...
9/29/2009 c1 MagicWords
Ooh, I liked this one very much. It was very...clear. A vague word but that's what first came to my mind.
Ooh, I liked this one very much. It was very...clear. A vague word but that's what first came to my mind.
8/18/2009 c4 Hitsu-Chan
Love the haiku! Beautifully written! And I am going to read more of your work!
Love the haiku! Beautifully written! And I am going to read more of your work!
7/21/2009 c4 tangerine dreamer
these are so beautiful in their simplicity. i love haikus and you did not disappoint with this. i like that you used the more i guess "dark" things in nature rather than the typical sun, flower, and tree that i've seen before.
i think my favorite is this last one about the moon.
"silent satellite" i like that line.
very nicely done, keep up the great work!
these are so beautiful in their simplicity. i love haikus and you did not disappoint with this. i like that you used the more i guess "dark" things in nature rather than the typical sun, flower, and tree that i've seen before.
i think my favorite is this last one about the moon.
"silent satellite" i like that line.
very nicely done, keep up the great work!
7/20/2009 c4 Michelle
Aww, I've never thought of the moon as lonely but I suppose it is. Wow... :) Nice job again..!
Aww, I've never thought of the moon as lonely but I suppose it is. Wow... :) Nice job again..!
7/20/2009 c3 Michelle
Wow...a rivers path in just a few words :) Haha good way to remember geography! Well done.
Wow...a rivers path in just a few words :) Haha good way to remember geography! Well done.