for It's a Swimmer's Life8/16/2009 c1 
30RockFan
Yeah so, I'm intrigued. Of course, I love most stories that have a sports storyline in them. I think you should continue.
I didn't notice any blaring mistakes, maybe a little one here or there, but I'm hardly an expert - take a look at my stories and you will see.
Anyway, I would like to see where you take this. I hope you continue.
30RockFanYeah so, I'm intrigued. Of course, I love most stories that have a sports storyline in them. I think you should continue.
I didn't notice any blaring mistakes, maybe a little one here or there, but I'm hardly an expert - take a look at my stories and you will see.
Anyway, I would like to see where you take this. I hope you continue.
7/24/2009 c1 natmarie
This sounds like it has lots of potential. I've always liked wastching swimming, just suffered from being completely mediocre... and recreational. Look forward to seeing what you do with this.
This sounds like it has lots of potential. I've always liked wastching swimming, just suffered from being completely mediocre... and recreational. Look forward to seeing what you do with this.
7/24/2009 c1 flunkybubbleshorts
Hey.. i wanna see where you're going with this :)
It sounds promising. hehe.
Sukanya
Hey.. i wanna see where you're going with this :)
It sounds promising. hehe.
Sukanya