for Scalp12/18/2009 c1 Asylle
Haunting. It's a beautiful story, really. It's so fragile and I was so surprised at the end. I love reading short stories that leave you thinking. It really illustrates the emotion and how it can ravage you inside.
Because some people spend all their lives coveting something else, but in this story the girl actually got it in an act of jealousy.I just can't describe it. If I tried to tell this story to someone I would fail miserably.
My only complaint is the paragraphs. I was so eager to keep reading I often skipped over a few sentences and then had to go back. Other than that, I loved it. Great creepy vibe and everything.
Asylle
Haunting. It's a beautiful story, really. It's so fragile and I was so surprised at the end. I love reading short stories that leave you thinking. It really illustrates the emotion and how it can ravage you inside.
Because some people spend all their lives coveting something else, but in this story the girl actually got it in an act of jealousy.I just can't describe it. If I tried to tell this story to someone I would fail miserably.
My only complaint is the paragraphs. I was so eager to keep reading I often skipped over a few sentences and then had to go back. Other than that, I loved it. Great creepy vibe and everything.
Asylle