for Moments Missed12/7/2012 c1 heal me forever
its was near perfect ..BUT there is a thing dat lacked d ending d words he say doesnt convince ME dat he loves HER dnt know ,,... !
its was near perfect ..BUT there is a thing dat lacked d ending d words he say doesnt convince ME dat he loves HER dnt know ,,... !
4/21/2012 c1 Ah
Sorry, but the fact that your main character was an oncokogist really bugged me- not because of her job but because of her age. Oncologist's educational training is four years at an undergraduate institution, four years at an accredited medical school, about three years as an internal medicine resident and then about two more years in an oncology subspecialty residency. This gives a grand total of eight years in college and about five more as a resident before one is qualified to practice as an oncologist.
Also you confuse me with saying she met Dallas in college- if she and Vincent went to school together and Dallas and Vincent were friends in High School how could they not have met? Did she move after middle school?
Sorry, but the fact that your main character was an oncokogist really bugged me- not because of her job but because of her age. Oncologist's educational training is four years at an undergraduate institution, four years at an accredited medical school, about three years as an internal medicine resident and then about two more years in an oncology subspecialty residency. This gives a grand total of eight years in college and about five more as a resident before one is qualified to practice as an oncologist.
Also you confuse me with saying she met Dallas in college- if she and Vincent went to school together and Dallas and Vincent were friends in High School how could they not have met? Did she move after middle school?
12/25/2009 c1 Icyfire4w5
1) When I read that Erica is begging and pouting, I think, "Poor Erica, she'll definitely soften Chase's heart."
2) Yeah, I agree that best friends can accept and understand each other's quirks, haha.
1) When I read that Erica is begging and pouting, I think, "Poor Erica, she'll definitely soften Chase's heart."
2) Yeah, I agree that best friends can accept and understand each other's quirks, haha.
12/17/2009 c1 Sofia
Oh my, this is... awesome. It is sad, it is touching, it is funny-ish. it is everything a story should be. Love it. Wedding stories like that are always the best.
Oh my, this is... awesome. It is sad, it is touching, it is funny-ish. it is everything a story should be. Love it. Wedding stories like that are always the best.
8/27/2009 c1 
9Lily Llynn
I kinda wish we had actually seen the romance develop (and maybe seen those missed moments), but this was incredibly sweet, and I'm very glad artistic dreamer added this to our c2. (:
9Lily LlynnI kinda wish we had actually seen the romance develop (and maybe seen those missed moments), but this was incredibly sweet, and I'm very glad artistic dreamer added this to our c2. (:
8/11/2009 c1 CharlotteBradhadair
i liked the story and the fact that the heroine wasnt over emotional and melodramatic
charlotte
i liked the story and the fact that the heroine wasnt over emotional and melodramatic
charlotte
8/7/2009 c1 Sarah Francise
This is the CUTEST story ever! MAKE MORE! !YOU ROCK!
This is the CUTEST story ever! MAKE MORE! !YOU ROCK!
7/27/2009 c1 2msallaroundperfect
Dang. I got all excited because I thought there was another chapter and it wasn't. If this us a one-shot, I love it. If it isn't, update soon.
2msallaroundperfectDang. I got all excited because I thought there was another chapter and it wasn't. If this us a one-shot, I love it. If it isn't, update soon.
7/27/2009 c1 19toffeecakesxox
very, very sweet(:
loved the buildup, and Vincent and Chase (and her name!)
now i have no idea who to vote for. :'(
19toffeecakesxoxvery, very sweet(:
loved the buildup, and Vincent and Chase (and her name!)
now i have no idea who to vote for. :'(