for Mr Clean2/23/2011 c1 
20E. M. Jenkinson
Poor guy! The suspense kept me hooked - and the fact I happened across this after showering with my boyfriend makes me want to remind him just how lucky he is! I absolutely adore (perhaps that is the wrong way) how you took such a simple obsession that many women have and turned it into something so disturbing. Great job, Diamond Dust!
20E. M. JenkinsonPoor guy! The suspense kept me hooked - and the fact I happened across this after showering with my boyfriend makes me want to remind him just how lucky he is! I absolutely adore (perhaps that is the wrong way) how you took such a simple obsession that many women have and turned it into something so disturbing. Great job, Diamond Dust!
7/28/2009 c1 Hitsu-Chan
Very good! It was very intresting, and the ending suprise me! Thanks for the good read, and I hope maybe you can check out my stories too.
Very good! It was very intresting, and the ending suprise me! Thanks for the good read, and I hope maybe you can check out my stories too.
7/25/2009 c1 19S. M. Saves
Maybe this piece should be entitled "Miss Clean". :)
I had a feeling something bad was going to happen to that guy, just not that. It surprised me, a good surprise though.
Thanks for the read.
19S. M. SavesMaybe this piece should be entitled "Miss Clean". :)
I had a feeling something bad was going to happen to that guy, just not that. It surprised me, a good surprise though.
Thanks for the read.