for explode8/22/2009 c1 
173Little girl Big world
I like the line "meaningless imprints"
and the last stanza and how you spaced out apart. Very effective :)
Great job!
173Little girl Big worldI like the line "meaningless imprints"
and the last stanza and how you spaced out apart. Very effective :)
Great job!
7/27/2009 c1 70rolliepollie44
LOVE what you did with the bolding and italicizing.
Every line fits really nicely with the next, and I really like the general idea. :D
Excellent work!
rolliepollie44
70rolliepollie44LOVE what you did with the bolding and italicizing.
Every line fits really nicely with the next, and I really like the general idea. :D
Excellent work!
rolliepollie44
7/26/2009 c1 35Coveredinblood11
I haven't seen my girlfriend in a week either...
the summer is a curse for lovers without
transportation.
35Coveredinblood11I haven't seen my girlfriend in a week either...
the summer is a curse for lovers without
transportation.