7/27/2009 c1 abhilasha
Its good, a real heavy poem. positive ... u are way ahead in pure english poetry, the story and the scene setup is fab. Its gr8 language wise, descpription of scene wise. U can interpret it in many terms ... obviously a poem means that ... but the main msg is not comin with lots of impact. on the whole i'd rather say as i feel that u missed the msg, 2nd ... I felt at places use of heavy words was not needed. It mad it look of classic sort of era's poem ... which people like me escpeically really find boring. Neways ... Bryon or wordsworth wud be glad to see it