7/28/2009 c1 dinodaw
Well, its an start. Don't let anything de-motivate you.
Dinodaw
"Reading is good for you"
Well, its an start. Don't let anything de-motivate you.
Dinodaw
"Reading is good for you"
7/27/2009 c1 Tinygoldie11
um no offense but this story needs some SERIOUS work! Maybe you should start with your type of writing. My advice is take a writing class THEN write stories! But it's nice that you gave it a shot!
Good luck!
p.s sorry if this review seemed mean...
um no offense but this story needs some SERIOUS work! Maybe you should start with your type of writing. My advice is take a writing class THEN write stories! But it's nice that you gave it a shot!
Good luck!
p.s sorry if this review seemed mean...