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19Alaeryel
Well this can't be good and now there is an even bigger mess to explode when her best friend and her brother finds out about this. It also answered why Austin was being blackmailed and I think she could do better-namely Carter but it in a normal life things should have been taken care of first although for effect the fiction and writing way is always so much more fun to read! I definitely can't wait to read more of this-please continue with it!
19AlaeryelWell this can't be good and now there is an even bigger mess to explode when her best friend and her brother finds out about this. It also answered why Austin was being blackmailed and I think she could do better-namely Carter but it in a normal life things should have been taken care of first although for effect the fiction and writing way is always so much more fun to read! I definitely can't wait to read more of this-please continue with it!
11/30/2013 c2 Alaeryel
I am with Carter on the taking back of Austin so soon atleast. He told her that the girl was blackmailing him-hmmm-what did he do to be blackmailed? Some questions need answering and I can't wait for more after this next chapter! GREAT chapter again!
I am with Carter on the taking back of Austin so soon atleast. He told her that the girl was blackmailing him-hmmm-what did he do to be blackmailed? Some questions need answering and I can't wait for more after this next chapter! GREAT chapter again!
11/30/2013 c1 Alaeryel
Well this is quite interesting and you have done a great job in building the plot and characters up! Not too many writers begin their stories as you have done so kudos for that too! At this point and only reading the one chapter I think it is worth continuing and now I am on to the next chapter.
Well this is quite interesting and you have done a great job in building the plot and characters up! Not too many writers begin their stories as you have done so kudos for that too! At this point and only reading the one chapter I think it is worth continuing and now I am on to the next chapter.
4/8/2010 c2 3HPRK08
Now this chapter was definitely better than the first. I like your descriptions!
But, you changed voice at the end, from 'I' to 'She'.
The line is- She pulled away panting heavily as he held her tightly. It would've made sense if it was in Carter's point of view.
But anyway, awesome progress! Can't wait for the rest!
3HPRK08Now this chapter was definitely better than the first. I like your descriptions!
But, you changed voice at the end, from 'I' to 'She'.
The line is- She pulled away panting heavily as he held her tightly. It would've made sense if it was in Carter's point of view.
But anyway, awesome progress! Can't wait for the rest!
4/8/2010 c1 HPRK08
Your introduction was great, just a little rushed, though. As someone else said, there might be too many full stops. But other than that, great story so far! Can't wait to read the rest!
Your introduction was great, just a little rushed, though. As someone else said, there might be too many full stops. But other than that, great story so far! Can't wait to read the rest!
8/17/2009 c2 R0ck3rAng3l4444
o i luv ur story glad u decided to do another chapter i've already got my fav ship ali+carter=OTP
o i luv ur story glad u decided to do another chapter i've already got my fav ship ali+carter=OTP
8/17/2009 c2 25KelaBelle
I like it x but u wouldnt forgive ur boyfriend so quickly and not for something like that anyway it was too non believeable, I mean it was the same girl he was with earlier too.
25KelaBelleI like it x but u wouldnt forgive ur boyfriend so quickly and not for something like that anyway it was too non believeable, I mean it was the same girl he was with earlier too.
7/28/2009 c1 25KelaBelle
I really like this story, but sometimes there's too many full stops when there dosen't need to be, also you said she hated her step mother but she was horrible one minute then the next she was apologising, apart from that I like it. x
25KelaBelleI really like this story, but sometimes there's too many full stops when there dosen't need to be, also you said she hated her step mother but she was horrible one minute then the next she was apologising, apart from that I like it. x
7/28/2009 c1 12Miss Mysteries
Interesting start to the story. Great way of introducing the characters. Hope you update soon.
12Miss MysteriesInteresting start to the story. Great way of introducing the characters. Hope you update soon.