for Cheer for Me12/31/2009 c4 covertwatch
i like james better than keegan for some reason...he just seems more genuine.
i like james better than keegan for some reason...he just seems more genuine.
12/31/2009 c2 covertwatch
i love the premise of this story. it's fresh and interesting and this particularly caught my attention because it's so true
“Yo, there’s a new guy.”
“Oh yeah?”
“Yeah. He’s pretty hot.”
“Cool.”
it was when you compared the underclassmen's more enthusiastic reaction to those of the upperclassmen. made me laugh :0
i love the premise of this story. it's fresh and interesting and this particularly caught my attention because it's so true
“Yo, there’s a new guy.”
“Oh yeah?”
“Yeah. He’s pretty hot.”
“Cool.”
it was when you compared the underclassmen's more enthusiastic reaction to those of the upperclassmen. made me laugh :0
12/28/2009 c4 
3cutepanda
=] I love James the best! He's the most interesting out of the two and I like how he was "complaining" about Audrey, but then ends up giving her a white gardenia! ^_^ I like reading about Audrey and James more then Keegan...
I find Keegan a bit... boring and so far he's really bland...
I like the thought of Audrey and James together.. (:
Oh and is Hazel going to be introduced soon?
Overall... this story is by far the most interesting story I've read! It's quite unique because I've never read a story about a cheerleader as the main, they're usually the "bitch" in the story! ^^
Can't wait for the next chapter!
C
3cutepanda=] I love James the best! He's the most interesting out of the two and I like how he was "complaining" about Audrey, but then ends up giving her a white gardenia! ^_^ I like reading about Audrey and James more then Keegan...
I find Keegan a bit... boring and so far he's really bland...
I like the thought of Audrey and James together.. (:
Oh and is Hazel going to be introduced soon?
Overall... this story is by far the most interesting story I've read! It's quite unique because I've never read a story about a cheerleader as the main, they're usually the "bitch" in the story! ^^
Can't wait for the next chapter!
C
12/19/2009 c4 DOMOxKUN
I'm really surprised you don't have that many reviews !
I love your voice in your chapters. I can tell you're not holding back when you're writing and I love that (:
I LOVE JAMES AND KEEGAN.
I usually pick favorites but I like that in this story, I don't have too (:
I hope you update soon and I'll definitely be waiting for it.
I'm really surprised you don't have that many reviews !
I love your voice in your chapters. I can tell you're not holding back when you're writing and I love that (:
I LOVE JAMES AND KEEGAN.
I usually pick favorites but I like that in this story, I don't have too (:
I hope you update soon and I'll definitely be waiting for it.
12/13/2009 c4 Alexis1702
Please update soon i love it! I don't really like Keegan but i love James! Audrey is so annoying its actually funny and i love her. Great story so far!
Please update soon i love it! I don't really like Keegan but i love James! Audrey is so annoying its actually funny and i love her. Great story so far!
12/9/2009 c1 Kat
Nice! I liked it. I really would like to read what comes next, when you're finished. Hmm, I don't know what to say. I like James? xD sorry, It's just he has this air of 'next door boy' like, wicked brat.
Take care and sorry for the spelling, english is not my language.
PS. I strongly dislike Twilight too... the sparkling thing kills me, though lmao.
Nice! I liked it. I really would like to read what comes next, when you're finished. Hmm, I don't know what to say. I like James? xD sorry, It's just he has this air of 'next door boy' like, wicked brat.
Take care and sorry for the spelling, english is not my language.
PS. I strongly dislike Twilight too... the sparkling thing kills me, though lmao.
11/7/2009 c4 Stacy
Just finished reading chap 4 (: I love James!
Great plot, interestingly juicy!
Just finished reading chap 4 (: I love James!
Great plot, interestingly juicy!
11/7/2009 c4 1noriepie
i can't wait for more. it does feel a bit cliched actually because the characters are put into positions that have been played out before. Although, she's a different side of a cheerleader, James is a typical badboy with looks and a big ego but secretly smart, and Keegan is the all likeable guy - and she's struggling between the two. So the roles they play is very familiar, the only thing is that Keegan is in a relationship already, and we don't have any picture of how serious that relationship is.
It is a typical love triangle now isn't it?
But still, I really can't wait to see how it will play out. The scene with that puny kid trying to steal her first kiss was hilarious. Love it.
1noriepiei can't wait for more. it does feel a bit cliched actually because the characters are put into positions that have been played out before. Although, she's a different side of a cheerleader, James is a typical badboy with looks and a big ego but secretly smart, and Keegan is the all likeable guy - and she's struggling between the two. So the roles they play is very familiar, the only thing is that Keegan is in a relationship already, and we don't have any picture of how serious that relationship is.
It is a typical love triangle now isn't it?
But still, I really can't wait to see how it will play out. The scene with that puny kid trying to steal her first kiss was hilarious. Love it.
9/26/2009 c4 1Nonica
I don't think this is too cliched at all. I absolutely love it! I'm so glad to read another story by you, it's exciting! :)
Keegan seems like a great guy, who wouldn't want someone like him? James is a bit more intriguing to me, mainly because I am imagining possibilities of where this might go between him and Audrey. He definitely has an arrogance to him, but it's not the normal cocky kind. He knows he's wanted, but he's not using that to his advantage. Plus how can he not have a bit of an arrogant attitude at least every once in a while when he has girls chasing him all the time. At least he doesn't use them or lead them on. He is not a jerk just because he can be. I respect him for that. I like him, I like him a lot. :) I can't wait to see how things turn out. I'm glad you're determined to finish this story as soon as possible. :D
1NonicaI don't think this is too cliched at all. I absolutely love it! I'm so glad to read another story by you, it's exciting! :)
Keegan seems like a great guy, who wouldn't want someone like him? James is a bit more intriguing to me, mainly because I am imagining possibilities of where this might go between him and Audrey. He definitely has an arrogance to him, but it's not the normal cocky kind. He knows he's wanted, but he's not using that to his advantage. Plus how can he not have a bit of an arrogant attitude at least every once in a while when he has girls chasing him all the time. At least he doesn't use them or lead them on. He is not a jerk just because he can be. I respect him for that. I like him, I like him a lot. :) I can't wait to see how things turn out. I'm glad you're determined to finish this story as soon as possible. :D
9/19/2009 c4 1funnechick
This is such an interesting and unique story. Keegan is cool...though I wish his presense didn't torture Audrey. And at times I like James, but when he starts acting all apathetic, it does get pretty annoying. I really hope you're able to update soon because you've left me dying of curiousity on what will happen with Audrey at school. Is it going to be the new trend with the guys to try to steal her first kiss? If so, shame on them, but it does make the whole story that much more interesting and dramatic.
1funnechickThis is such an interesting and unique story. Keegan is cool...though I wish his presense didn't torture Audrey. And at times I like James, but when he starts acting all apathetic, it does get pretty annoying. I really hope you're able to update soon because you've left me dying of curiousity on what will happen with Audrey at school. Is it going to be the new trend with the guys to try to steal her first kiss? If so, shame on them, but it does make the whole story that much more interesting and dramatic.
9/14/2009 c4 klankinplankin
i know you're not going to update for a while, but i really, really want to read this thing soon. its kinda cliched, yeah. but i really like james. keegan is such a.. mary sue. in male form, anyway. i enjoyed the first four chapters very much. keep up the good work.
i know you're not going to update for a while, but i really, really want to read this thing soon. its kinda cliched, yeah. but i really like james. keegan is such a.. mary sue. in male form, anyway. i enjoyed the first four chapters very much. keep up the good work.
9/7/2009 c4 xDoubleU
Wow, guess how surprised I was when I went to check your profile for those elevator jokes to see it updated and with a new story? Yeah, I was preety surprised. Like huge-plate-eyes surprised.
Anyway, on to the story, I loved it! I hafta say, I like James a whole lot more than Keegan, but I've always like the 'bad-boy' types, so xD
I like Michael ;P and I love you sense of humour! xD
Well, I hope you finish 'Cheer for Me' soon, since I can't wait to read what happens after everyone tries to steal Audrey's first kiss ;P
Wow, guess how surprised I was when I went to check your profile for those elevator jokes to see it updated and with a new story? Yeah, I was preety surprised. Like huge-plate-eyes surprised.
Anyway, on to the story, I loved it! I hafta say, I like James a whole lot more than Keegan, but I've always like the 'bad-boy' types, so xD
I like Michael ;P and I love you sense of humour! xD
Well, I hope you finish 'Cheer for Me' soon, since I can't wait to read what happens after everyone tries to steal Audrey's first kiss ;P
8/31/2009 c4 natmarie
Hey, I'm an old fan with a new pen name. I like this. It's different. It has some cliche things in it, but really what isn't cliche anymore. Anything with sterotypes can seem cliche these days. You have good characterization and a way of working the plot to your advantage and making readers (at least me) want to know more.
Hey, I'm an old fan with a new pen name. I like this. It's different. It has some cliche things in it, but really what isn't cliche anymore. Anything with sterotypes can seem cliche these days. You have good characterization and a way of working the plot to your advantage and making readers (at least me) want to know more.
8/31/2009 c4 2InspiredByAKiss
I checked on your profile because I was impatient for an update, so I'm kind of disapponted that there won't be one coming anytime soon. I'll be great being able to read the story in one go though, so I guess I'll just have to suck it up.
After reading the first chapter, I thought Keegan was the love interest, so I'm glad you brought in James next. He just seems more... interesting, I guess.
And I love, love the twist where all the boys are going to try kissing her. :D
While on your profile I read your opinions on YA books and (apart from those I haven't read) I agree on practically all of them, lol. Hate Twilight with a passion too, and you were right to discontinue PC Cast's series. It's horrible - I dropped it after the second one. I didn't like City of Bones either, but I have to say the second and third book are way better. It's one of those series that actually improves. :)
I couldn't get into Wicked Lovely, but I liked Melissa De La Cruz's series... only I wish I'd known there are going to be SIX more books. That's just too long a wait.
Anyway, I hope you have fun writing the story and I look forward to reading it!
- V
2InspiredByAKissI checked on your profile because I was impatient for an update, so I'm kind of disapponted that there won't be one coming anytime soon. I'll be great being able to read the story in one go though, so I guess I'll just have to suck it up.
After reading the first chapter, I thought Keegan was the love interest, so I'm glad you brought in James next. He just seems more... interesting, I guess.
And I love, love the twist where all the boys are going to try kissing her. :D
While on your profile I read your opinions on YA books and (apart from those I haven't read) I agree on practically all of them, lol. Hate Twilight with a passion too, and you were right to discontinue PC Cast's series. It's horrible - I dropped it after the second one. I didn't like City of Bones either, but I have to say the second and third book are way better. It's one of those series that actually improves. :)
I couldn't get into Wicked Lovely, but I liked Melissa De La Cruz's series... only I wish I'd known there are going to be SIX more books. That's just too long a wait.
Anyway, I hope you have fun writing the story and I look forward to reading it!
- V