for Cheer for Me8/22/2009 c1 jiali18
OMG YOU'RE WRITING AGAIN! Wow, I started to give up going on this site because I can't seem to find any good stories anymore. And if I do find them, they're rarely updated. But, I'm so excited that you're writing again! I LOVED "Not for me." Like, I don't think you understand. I've read that story at least three times and each time, it never fails to make me cry. Anyway, hopefully I'll like this story as much as I liked that story. :D I'm really curious to see where this goes because, well, the main character's a cheerleader. And I have all those stereotypes of cheerleaders running around in my mind...
OMG YOU'RE WRITING AGAIN! Wow, I started to give up going on this site because I can't seem to find any good stories anymore. And if I do find them, they're rarely updated. But, I'm so excited that you're writing again! I LOVED "Not for me." Like, I don't think you understand. I've read that story at least three times and each time, it never fails to make me cry. Anyway, hopefully I'll like this story as much as I liked that story. :D I'm really curious to see where this goes because, well, the main character's a cheerleader. And I have all those stereotypes of cheerleaders running around in my mind...
8/21/2009 c4 SarcasmIsPoetry
I think it's not really cliched, especially that the main character is a cheerleader who's stereotyped as a mean girl. The contrast between the two boys might sound common, but interesting nonetheless.
Between the two guys, I like James more. I'm the person who likes the 'bad boy' types, so what? Haha. My expectations from Keegan is that he also has an 'inner bad boy' or something. Well, ignore me.
Oh well, I guess you write more of this. I hope you update soon. :D
I think it's not really cliched, especially that the main character is a cheerleader who's stereotyped as a mean girl. The contrast between the two boys might sound common, but interesting nonetheless.
Between the two guys, I like James more. I'm the person who likes the 'bad boy' types, so what? Haha. My expectations from Keegan is that he also has an 'inner bad boy' or something. Well, ignore me.
Oh well, I guess you write more of this. I hope you update soon. :D
8/21/2009 c4 CATpuccino
What's with the younger boy? lol. It's a bit cliched but in a good way I think. And certainly isn't dull. I love this story. I prefer James a way much than Keegan btw.
What's with the younger boy? lol. It's a bit cliched but in a good way I think. And certainly isn't dull. I love this story. I prefer James a way much than Keegan btw.
8/21/2009 c4 
10Aurora Corona
LOL. Your sense of humor is SO awesome!
Especially describing Keegan as the Berlin Wall. Hehe. That's pretty cool.
I'm glad you feel like finishing the story soon! Can't wait for more of your uber-quick updates :D
10Aurora CoronaLOL. Your sense of humor is SO awesome!
Especially describing Keegan as the Berlin Wall. Hehe. That's pretty cool.
I'm glad you feel like finishing the story soon! Can't wait for more of your uber-quick updates :D
8/21/2009 c4 Aragorn is mine
honestly speaking, only you can pull off a story like this =) It is kind of cliche but then what isn't? I mean with the number of stories out here. But it DOES have enough twists and stuff to keep it going, I mean I like the new twist with everyone trying to kiss Audrey now, it's pretty funny. Wonder how she'll handle it. And James is pretty appealing =) Well hope you update soon and finish ASAP I'm really starting to get into this story and would be pretty sad if it didn't finish until agees later.
honestly speaking, only you can pull off a story like this =) It is kind of cliche but then what isn't? I mean with the number of stories out here. But it DOES have enough twists and stuff to keep it going, I mean I like the new twist with everyone trying to kiss Audrey now, it's pretty funny. Wonder how she'll handle it. And James is pretty appealing =) Well hope you update soon and finish ASAP I'm really starting to get into this story and would be pretty sad if it didn't finish until agees later.
8/21/2009 c4 Ms.Romantic
i like it...
but its high school
its also about
like parties
and sexual tension
and stufflike that
so if you add that in ill be the happiest reader on the planet
and james is my fave
SO SO SO HOT
kegan is aight
i like it...
but its high school
its also about
like parties
and sexual tension
and stufflike that
so if you add that in ill be the happiest reader on the planet
and james is my fave
SO SO SO HOT
kegan is aight
8/21/2009 c4 3ayojess
When Audrey threw his flower into the garbage i was like, wow that's harsh. I mean, the guy just wanted to kiss her. And althogh it would've been her first, it's not a tragedy and she was being melodramatic. But James's definitely thinks hes the shit. That superiority stuff is annoying.
That said... I love his smartass character. And he definitely has a jones for audrey. But i do love Keegan, cuz everybody likes the nice guy. He's sweet. And in real life, I'd probs be rooting for him.
Update soon!
3ayojessWhen Audrey threw his flower into the garbage i was like, wow that's harsh. I mean, the guy just wanted to kiss her. And althogh it would've been her first, it's not a tragedy and she was being melodramatic. But James's definitely thinks hes the shit. That superiority stuff is annoying.
That said... I love his smartass character. And he definitely has a jones for audrey. But i do love Keegan, cuz everybody likes the nice guy. He's sweet. And in real life, I'd probs be rooting for him.
Update soon!
8/21/2009 c4 ess3sandra
im guessing the house that the mother sold is the new house of james and that there is a bet, maybe to see who will kiss aubrey. was it really audrey or is it aubrey? that james saw from the restaurant, tha tis why he tried to kiss her? lookig forward for an update.
im guessing the house that the mother sold is the new house of james and that there is a bet, maybe to see who will kiss aubrey. was it really audrey or is it aubrey? that james saw from the restaurant, tha tis why he tried to kiss her? lookig forward for an update.
8/21/2009 c3 ess3sandra
good chapter. would have wished for some more descriptions in the last conversation between audrey and james, it was a bot too much dialouge according to me. i liked that you twisted the step brothers hate each other cliche and made a joke about it, well done.
good chapter. would have wished for some more descriptions in the last conversation between audrey and james, it was a bot too much dialouge according to me. i liked that you twisted the step brothers hate each other cliche and made a joke about it, well done.
8/21/2009 c3 Avidreader222
im really starting to love this story! i hope you dont take it offline, but if you must, please tell me where your putting it, cus i definitely want to read the rest of this story! its a great plot so far, update soon!
im really starting to love this story! i hope you dont take it offline, but if you must, please tell me where your putting it, cus i definitely want to read the rest of this story! its a great plot so far, update soon!
8/21/2009 c3 Irrationallyrational
Now that was cool. I'm glad you didn't start off the story with immediate hatred. There was an inkling of a friendship going on and bam tries to kiss her. I thought someone like him wouldn't be trying that nonsense for awhile. Caught me off guard there. Vereh nice chapter. =D
Now that was cool. I'm glad you didn't start off the story with immediate hatred. There was an inkling of a friendship going on and bam tries to kiss her. I thought someone like him wouldn't be trying that nonsense for awhile. Caught me off guard there. Vereh nice chapter. =D
8/21/2009 c3 8JamieBell
Haha WOW this James kid is some character. I have absolutely no idea how to take him. Except I think he is truly obnoxious and too aware of himself. And poor Audrey, being taken advantage of like that. So not fair! This is really entertaining so far, I can't wait to see what happens next! Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
8JamieBellHaha WOW this James kid is some character. I have absolutely no idea how to take him. Except I think he is truly obnoxious and too aware of himself. And poor Audrey, being taken advantage of like that. So not fair! This is really entertaining so far, I can't wait to see what happens next! Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
8/21/2009 c3 K.B. Hanna
This was a cute chapter. Are they really stepbrothers, or something else? Anyway, if you're worried about plagiarisers, I would contact Myrika and inquire about Plagiarism Haven. It's a locked lj community with tons of members.
This was a cute chapter. Are they really stepbrothers, or something else? Anyway, if you're worried about plagiarisers, I would contact Myrika and inquire about Plagiarism Haven. It's a locked lj community with tons of members.
8/21/2009 c3 2Evadere
I loved the mimicking in the beginning. James is definitely interesting,and I'm liking the humor in this chapter. Audrey's sarcasm/jokes makes her more likeable if that makes any sense? Almost stealing a first kiss is a pretty big deal, but James apologizing once and then moving on makes me like his character :)
2EvadereI loved the mimicking in the beginning. James is definitely interesting,and I'm liking the humor in this chapter. Audrey's sarcasm/jokes makes her more likeable if that makes any sense? Almost stealing a first kiss is a pretty big deal, but James apologizing once and then moving on makes me like his character :)