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for Which Will You Choose?

1/11/2010 c1 Eloquent-Marionette
Woah, this is a good one! Very thought-provoking. You'd think you would do the right thing in those kinds of situations, but really you never know. It all depends on how strong you are at that moment. I like the second to last line "does your soul and spirit argue or agree". That's a very important point. Because when the opportunity to do bad or good arises, if your heart and mind are not in agreement, that could lead you to do something you'll regret. This is why it's good to train both to do what's right. So it's easier to do what's right when the opportunity comes up. Anyways, very nicely written. I always love your work. haha. Well, you know what I say- keep writing forever and always!

Love ya lots!

~Davida
7/28/2009 c1 115Random-Idiocity
Life gives us so many choices and it can be confusing to decide at times. I thought you did a wonderful job with this and I'm glad to see something new. Makes me happy. We will all miss our dear friend, brother, father, & husband, but know we will see him soon. Keep it Up!

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