9/2/2009 c1 2ninety8
Good story! Although, I can't understand the ending much. Could you please explain it for me? I believe that Leah chose to go home and she said her goodbyes. But how come she is still in hell?
Good story! Although, I can't understand the ending much. Could you please explain it for me? I believe that Leah chose to go home and she said her goodbyes. But how come she is still in hell?
8/25/2009 c1 7Once Upon a Time is Forever
Ohmigoodness, i was so freaked out that she was actually going to leave hell and Austin! But anyway, this is such a good story; very well-written and perfectly dramatic and fluffy. Thanks for a great read :D
Ohmigoodness, i was so freaked out that she was actually going to leave hell and Austin! But anyway, this is such a good story; very well-written and perfectly dramatic and fluffy. Thanks for a great read :D
8/16/2009 c1 Karla
I LOVE THIS BOOK. It is one of the best things ive ever read and i would definatly buy it. Its so interesting and im so glad your not following everyone else and just writting vampire story's. There arent many story's about hell or demons and im so happy you took the time to. Im writing a story too about werewolves, vampires and other fantasy creatures like faries but it wont be nearly as good as your story. Hope to read more story's by u. XOXO Karla
I LOVE THIS BOOK. It is one of the best things ive ever read and i would definatly buy it. Its so interesting and im so glad your not following everyone else and just writting vampire story's. There arent many story's about hell or demons and im so happy you took the time to. Im writing a story too about werewolves, vampires and other fantasy creatures like faries but it wont be nearly as good as your story. Hope to read more story's by u. XOXO Karla
7/30/2009 c1 1Banpaia Bara
Good story, Though I must say it is a lot to take in at one sitting. Perhaps split it up into a few seperate chapters that way the reader can stop after a little bit for a break and know where they are then come back to it and not have to look for the spessific line. I'm not done yet, but I am a ways into it. I plan on reading the rest after I give my eyes a break for a little bit. :)
Good story, Though I must say it is a lot to take in at one sitting. Perhaps split it up into a few seperate chapters that way the reader can stop after a little bit for a break and know where they are then come back to it and not have to look for the spessific line. I'm not done yet, but I am a ways into it. I plan on reading the rest after I give my eyes a break for a little bit. :)
7/30/2009 c1 amanda
oh my gosh, just wow.
im really excited about something coming in the mail right now and this story allowed me to forget about that and kill time.
seriously, i felt a pang in my heart when i thought she chose the human world.
great length too!
good job!
oh my gosh, just wow.
im really excited about something coming in the mail right now and this story allowed me to forget about that and kill time.
seriously, i felt a pang in my heart when i thought she chose the human world.
great length too!
good job!