for You Can't Stop Me2/20/2010 c1 
4HighOnBrokenWings
That last line topped it all off really nicely.
The repitition worked really well, the poem itself kind of reminded me of Susan Boyles "I dreamed a dream." But, yeah, that's just my insane head talking. Ignore!
Theres something quite foreboding with that last line, I really liked it :) Keep it up!
4HighOnBrokenWingsThat last line topped it all off really nicely.
The repitition worked really well, the poem itself kind of reminded me of Susan Boyles "I dreamed a dream." But, yeah, that's just my insane head talking. Ignore!
Theres something quite foreboding with that last line, I really liked it :) Keep it up!
11/30/2009 c1 BartholomewCubbins
Really, really good. I absolutely loved this poem. I think the last line in particularly nailed the message you were trying to get across. Keep up the good work!
Really, really good. I absolutely loved this poem. I think the last line in particularly nailed the message you were trying to get across. Keep up the good work!
10/15/2009 c1 12Broken-Angel-1994
I really really like the last line of this. I think you got the point you were trying to make across. Good work!
12Broken-Angel-1994I really really like the last line of this. I think you got the point you were trying to make across. Good work!
10/1/2009 c1 147SpottedStar
Wow, just wow. This poem is amazing, I really really loved it. I have a poem called "Simply Me" you might enjoy it. Keep up the good work, your poems are incredibly insprational!
SpottedStar :)
147SpottedStarWow, just wow. This poem is amazing, I really really loved it. I have a poem called "Simply Me" you might enjoy it. Keep up the good work, your poems are incredibly insprational!
SpottedStar :)