for Only Reason8/12/2009 c1 
115ArekuKawaii
I liked the last two lines of this poem the best. They are sharp and they flow well together. I think they flowed the best out of the entire poem. Also, despite a more simple diction for those two lines they still held the proper amount of intelligence for a line like that.
I didn't like the concept for it was quite cliche and overdone. Also, a few lines didn't need the comma, because that would have helped the flow better.
115ArekuKawaiiI liked the last two lines of this poem the best. They are sharp and they flow well together. I think they flowed the best out of the entire poem. Also, despite a more simple diction for those two lines they still held the proper amount of intelligence for a line like that.
I didn't like the concept for it was quite cliche and overdone. Also, a few lines didn't need the comma, because that would have helped the flow better.