
7/30/2009 c1 CandleQueen
"Hopping that it will all be better."
It should be 'hoping'.
I like the image of the tears mixing with the shower, and how the subject was still cold, even after stepping out of the hot water.
Nicely done,
-Ramen
"Hopping that it will all be better."
It should be 'hoping'.
I like the image of the tears mixing with the shower, and how the subject was still cold, even after stepping out of the hot water.
Nicely done,
-Ramen