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9/8/2009 c1 kamwe kukua
i really really like your writing, your poems are amazing!
7/30/2009 c1 CandleQueen
"Hopping that it will all be better."

It should be 'hoping'.

I like the image of the tears mixing with the shower, and how the subject was still cold, even after stepping out of the hot water.

Nicely done,

-Ramen

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