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4/26/2010 c1 Isca
Jesus. The repetition of the line "make it dig a little deeper" is absolutely heart-wrenching. I love it. The tone is quite powerful and raw here. It's a short poem, on a relatable subject, but you made it your own. Keep up the good work. :)
7/30/2009 c1 5SilentVoices
Very depressing.

I thought that it could have been a bit longer to expand on the emotional level. But overall, a decently written poem. Kudos. :)
7/30/2009 c1 CandleQueen
"I push a little harder,

make it dig a little deeper."

I liked the added emphasis of the repeated lines, and the image of the cut 'going alongside the others.'


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