for The Misadventure of a Virgin11/20/2010 c2 
6mindreader311
You loaded this twice for both chapters so you know and I'm not sure if I feel bad or not... Don't get me wrong you wrote well with a few typos but still it was written well, but I feel like you should have waited for someone who meant more to you. Oh well Im not your mom! Still it was cute! Clumsy but cute.
6mindreader311You loaded this twice for both chapters so you know and I'm not sure if I feel bad or not... Don't get me wrong you wrote well with a few typos but still it was written well, but I feel like you should have waited for someone who meant more to you. Oh well Im not your mom! Still it was cute! Clumsy but cute.
7/30/2010 c2 5TheLadySongSerenade
um... okay? right... so... write more? is that the right sentiment? haha. It's pretty good writing... I'm not really sure about the story itself, but hey- it's your story. So... in that case... write more! =)
5TheLadySongSerenadeum... okay? right... so... write more? is that the right sentiment? haha. It's pretty good writing... I'm not really sure about the story itself, but hey- it's your story. So... in that case... write more! =)
11/12/2009 c2 anoo
o.o you know... he must of been a virgin or something is utterly wrong with that fool. o.o have fun.
o.o you know... he must of been a virgin or something is utterly wrong with that fool. o.o have fun.
8/14/2009 c1 yourbestiefrand
haha
silly girl
ily bestie.
tee hee i made the condom rape your bra.
hehe part of my club.
in and out his member went,POP! goes your cherry. :p
dont hit me.
kay? i made you gyoza
haha
silly girl
ily bestie.
tee hee i made the condom rape your bra.
hehe part of my club.
in and out his member went,POP! goes your cherry. :p
dont hit me.
kay? i made you gyoza
8/14/2009 c1 Le Asheley
...
Wow that was wonderful...
tehe
dirty girl
booty cal
lol
tehe
tehe
tehe
tehehehehehehe
interesting way to have your cherry popped.
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Wow that was wonderful...
tehe
dirty girl
booty cal
lol
tehe
tehe
tehe
tehehehehehehe
interesting way to have your cherry popped.
8/7/2009 c1 1G Harms
I liked this very much and it scared me just a little at how close it comes to my own experiences. It was well written and I think you write good.
1G HarmsI liked this very much and it scared me just a little at how close it comes to my own experiences. It was well written and I think you write good.
8/4/2009 c1 1Lillian Marie
its a very interesting sex scence, haha. if i wrote of my first time, well you would probibly laugh and call me pathetic.
1Lillian Marieits a very interesting sex scence, haha. if i wrote of my first time, well you would probibly laugh and call me pathetic.
8/3/2009 c1 Sarah292
Ohh man this so reminds me of all those awkward high school hookups lol very well done! i could totally relate to it and it was very enjoyable to read
Ohh man this so reminds me of all those awkward high school hookups lol very well done! i could totally relate to it and it was very enjoyable to read
8/3/2009 c1 Obsession Changes Things
HAHA I WAS THERE! LOVED IT. WANTED IT. HAD IT. AND LET ME TELL YOU HE WAS GREAT! OH MAN, ALL THE PLANNING AND PRE STUFF THAT WENT INTO ALL OF THAT, GOOD TIMES MAN GOOD TIMES. BUT I MEAN COME ON WE ALL KNEW HE WOULD GIVE IN IT WAS JUST A METTER OF TIME. BOYS, ONLY GOOD TO THROW ROCKS AT, TO DO, AND TO BOSS AROUND. I SEND KISSES, NOT TO YOU TO HIM. MUA-HA-HA I TOLD YOU I WOULD REVIEW FIRST!
~OBSESSION
~~JEN
HAHA I WAS THERE! LOVED IT. WANTED IT. HAD IT. AND LET ME TELL YOU HE WAS GREAT! OH MAN, ALL THE PLANNING AND PRE STUFF THAT WENT INTO ALL OF THAT, GOOD TIMES MAN GOOD TIMES. BUT I MEAN COME ON WE ALL KNEW HE WOULD GIVE IN IT WAS JUST A METTER OF TIME. BOYS, ONLY GOOD TO THROW ROCKS AT, TO DO, AND TO BOSS AROUND. I SEND KISSES, NOT TO YOU TO HIM. MUA-HA-HA I TOLD YOU I WOULD REVIEW FIRST!
~OBSESSION
~~JEN