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for We are the Stars

2/19/2010 c1 1esthaelum
I loved this. I love short poems.

I liked how you portrayed the stars and how you can relate to them, it's very deep and... atmosperic (posh word, wahey~)

My favourite part was the last part. It was random, but nice.

"The stars will continue to twinkle

While someone’s making love on their couch

Or someone is painting the next Mona Lisa

Because that’s just what we do

We get by."

Hehe, see you ^_^
1/2/2010 c1 26not atlas
i read it. well, duh. but i read it, and i think it's a little amazing.

it was a sort of down-on-its-luck poem at the beginning, and then it realized there was hope, and i'm sort of in love with that.

the only thing wrong at all with this poem was just a little error, 'And we’ll get pass them all' should be past. sorry, i'm anal when it comes to things like this.

but otherwise, your writing is beautiful; so keep at it. :)
8/6/2009 c1 1angel-the-twisted
I love how this poem makes you think! It is written clearly, and worded well. Very nice job.

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