for We are the Stars2/19/2010 c1 
1esthaelum
I loved this. I love short poems.
I liked how you portrayed the stars and how you can relate to them, it's very deep and... atmosperic (posh word, wahey~)
My favourite part was the last part. It was random, but nice.
"The stars will continue to twinkle
While someone’s making love on their couch
Or someone is painting the next Mona Lisa
Because that’s just what we do
We get by."
Hehe, see you ^_^
1esthaelumI loved this. I love short poems.
I liked how you portrayed the stars and how you can relate to them, it's very deep and... atmosperic (posh word, wahey~)
My favourite part was the last part. It was random, but nice.
"The stars will continue to twinkle
While someone’s making love on their couch
Or someone is painting the next Mona Lisa
Because that’s just what we do
We get by."
Hehe, see you ^_^
1/2/2010 c1 26not atlas
i read it. well, duh. but i read it, and i think it's a little amazing.
it was a sort of down-on-its-luck poem at the beginning, and then it realized there was hope, and i'm sort of in love with that.
the only thing wrong at all with this poem was just a little error, 'And we’ll get pass them all' should be past. sorry, i'm anal when it comes to things like this.
but otherwise, your writing is beautiful; so keep at it. :)
26not atlasi read it. well, duh. but i read it, and i think it's a little amazing.
it was a sort of down-on-its-luck poem at the beginning, and then it realized there was hope, and i'm sort of in love with that.
the only thing wrong at all with this poem was just a little error, 'And we’ll get pass them all' should be past. sorry, i'm anal when it comes to things like this.
but otherwise, your writing is beautiful; so keep at it. :)
8/6/2009 c1 1angel-the-twisted
I love how this poem makes you think! It is written clearly, and worded well. Very nice job.
1angel-the-twistedI love how this poem makes you think! It is written clearly, and worded well. Very nice job.