8/4/2009 c1 C6
Liked this very much. Good use of suspense. Hope to read more soon. Thanks for posting.

8/3/2009 c1 7SuzyJane
wow... it's very interesting... And the details are wonderful :) it's so suspenseful too, I really like it... also the line "Enough. Enough about his bloody footwear." I don't know why but I love it lol :)