for Learning To Write8/24/2017 c1 Otaku ami
Damn, I loved the ending of this story! And how thy both describe love in the end. It's like I was waiting for them to confess, but their eyes spoke everything for each other.
Damn, I loved the ending of this story! And how thy both describe love in the end. It's like I was waiting for them to confess, but their eyes spoke everything for each other.
3/4/2017 c1 Canada1
Very cute. Thanks for sharing.
Very cute. Thanks for sharing.
4/9/2014 c1 ughwhy
The story has succumbed to clichés but that is not bad at all. It has some fresh concepts and I really like the main character. Although "best friends in love" is an overused concept, I think you pulled it off with amazing writing and characters who seem alive. Thank you for the great read!
The story has succumbed to clichés but that is not bad at all. It has some fresh concepts and I really like the main character. Although "best friends in love" is an overused concept, I think you pulled it off with amazing writing and characters who seem alive. Thank you for the great read!
2/7/2014 c1 
4HollyRose2043
That was just the right amount: not overly gushy writing, but not detached either. I'm still not sure I'm a fan of cliches though; they make for interesting discussion about their origin, but (as their nature would suggest) they're over-used. Paradoxically, chronic avoidance of cliches is also a cliche. There's no winning.
From the point of view of someone who brainstormed ideas for a story last night for 3 hours only to write a lame-ass 2 paragraph intro, I understand her frustration. I was having a tough time not punching a hole through my walls or computer (it was due the next morning).
4HollyRose2043That was just the right amount: not overly gushy writing, but not detached either. I'm still not sure I'm a fan of cliches though; they make for interesting discussion about their origin, but (as their nature would suggest) they're over-used. Paradoxically, chronic avoidance of cliches is also a cliche. There's no winning.
From the point of view of someone who brainstormed ideas for a story last night for 3 hours only to write a lame-ass 2 paragraph intro, I understand her frustration. I was having a tough time not punching a hole through my walls or computer (it was due the next morning).
12/26/2013 c1 4sami1995
ADORABLE! AMAZING! And i keep on coming back. I just really, really love your writing and I feel like the characters just come to life in my head. You make me wish you would just keep on writing and writing. And the best friend thing never gets old, lol. THREE CHEERS!
4sami1995ADORABLE! AMAZING! And i keep on coming back. I just really, really love your writing and I feel like the characters just come to life in my head. You make me wish you would just keep on writing and writing. And the best friend thing never gets old, lol. THREE CHEERS!
10/1/2013 c1 loveromance
Awwwwwww
Awwwwwww
2/1/2013 c1 color outside the lines
Aww! How cute! I love how she didn't have to tell him and she just figured it out on his own! I completely understand how she feels. I have tried to write romance stories...just...no. Luckily, there are wonderful writers like you so I don't have to torture the world with my horrific writing. :) It was really good for being so short. Anyway, um..yeah. I liked it. :)
Aww! How cute! I love how she didn't have to tell him and she just figured it out on his own! I completely understand how she feels. I have tried to write romance stories...just...no. Luckily, there are wonderful writers like you so I don't have to torture the world with my horrific writing. :) It was really good for being so short. Anyway, um..yeah. I liked it. :)
11/13/2012 c1 Sparkly Sparkler the Sparkling
This is such a sweet and fluffy oneshot. :) I've always loved the best friends-in love cliches the best. Awesome story!
This is such a sweet and fluffy oneshot. :) I've always loved the best friends-in love cliches the best. Awesome story!
10/8/2012 c1 mortality.is.overrated
awww! that was really cute! i wish you d written a little more but i love short stories too.
awww! that was really cute! i wish you d written a little more but i love short stories too.
8/4/2012 c1 HopelessFeathers
This was a rather enjoyable one-shot.
It's cute. I kind of wished there was more to it since the whole realization of her liking her best friend happened a little too quickly, for me at least.
This was a rather enjoyable one-shot.
It's cute. I kind of wished there was more to it since the whole realization of her liking her best friend happened a little too quickly, for me at least.