for Bedside Banter8/11/2009 c1 
24Limited Edition
I like the flow of this piece. it's very refreshing with the dialogue. Very cute story.
24Limited EditionI like the flow of this piece. it's very refreshing with the dialogue. Very cute story.
8/5/2009 c1 2alwaysfaith
I like your writing. It's easy on the eyes and even though I don't exactly read these kind of stories, I couldn't help but reading the whole chapter.
Normally, I like the whole...dangerous guy and some other guy are totally straight... or so they think but then the dangerous guy HAS TO KILL HIM OH MY GOD AND IS THIS LOVE-WAIT NO THEY'RE STRAIGHT- NO THEY LOVE EACH OTHER.
But that's probably just me. (:
but in short, I thought it was pretty cute.
2alwaysfaithI like your writing. It's easy on the eyes and even though I don't exactly read these kind of stories, I couldn't help but reading the whole chapter.
Normally, I like the whole...dangerous guy and some other guy are totally straight... or so they think but then the dangerous guy HAS TO KILL HIM OH MY GOD AND IS THIS LOVE-WAIT NO THEY'RE STRAIGHT- NO THEY LOVE EACH OTHER.
But that's probably just me. (:
but in short, I thought it was pretty cute.
8/5/2009 c1 1Mercedes Woods
I liked the relationship. Their conversation was funny and sarcastic. I don't really consider it a story, though. I see this more as a scene that could possibly be continued.
1Mercedes WoodsI liked the relationship. Their conversation was funny and sarcastic. I don't really consider it a story, though. I see this more as a scene that could possibly be continued.