for Staying In Bed8/6/2009 c1 EmilyOliveP
I liked it, but felt it was a bit plain. Maybe a little more pizazz in the prose - there is nothing characteristic about it, nothing really special. But the story has potential, and I look forward to reading more. Also, I would suggest, if you're going to use the F word, rating it T or at least K+. Not K.
I liked it, but felt it was a bit plain. Maybe a little more pizazz in the prose - there is nothing characteristic about it, nothing really special. But the story has potential, and I look forward to reading more. Also, I would suggest, if you're going to use the F word, rating it T or at least K+. Not K.