for Passing Lanes6/14/2016 c5 Hiaa123
Great update :) totally forgot all the history between Seb and Jules and Ryan so in suspense all over again
Great update :) totally forgot all the history between Seb and Jules and Ryan so in suspense all over again
6/10/2016 c5 
1Du
Aaaaaah! I just came across this story today and I love it! Such real characters, the story is just so normal - there is no instant liking or falling in love, the characters are complex (especially Seb, at least up to this point), and I'm just really really enjoying it! And I am a sucker for such long characters. Please, please update soon! Can't wait to keep reading :)
1DuAaaaaah! I just came across this story today and I love it! Such real characters, the story is just so normal - there is no instant liking or falling in love, the characters are complex (especially Seb, at least up to this point), and I'm just really really enjoying it! And I am a sucker for such long characters. Please, please update soon! Can't wait to keep reading :)
6/8/2016 c5 Guest
love the chapters from Seb's pov
love the chapters from Seb's pov
6/5/2016 c5 Booksbooks
Cool story! Hope you update soon
Cool story! Hope you update soon
5/4/2016 c4 Hiaa123
Great chapter! Your rewrite really makes the characters more developed and the story more realistic. Update soon!
Great chapter! Your rewrite really makes the characters more developed and the story more realistic. Update soon!
2/24/2016 c3 1xoxtina46xox
This story brought me back to fictionpress! I love how the story is coming along so far and am really glad you're going through reposting/editing etc. The dialog and thoughts of the characters really flow. I feel like the story already has me on my toes. I can't wait to read more :)
1xoxtina46xoxThis story brought me back to fictionpress! I love how the story is coming along so far and am really glad you're going through reposting/editing etc. The dialog and thoughts of the characters really flow. I feel like the story already has me on my toes. I can't wait to read more :)
11/10/2015 c15 Shmoophoppoop
Hah! Half way?
Its been five years...
This would be an okay ending I guess.
Okay hell no because I still don't know what the deal between Linnea and Rawder is!
Its a cool story.
Any chance at completion?
Hah! Half way?
Its been five years...
This would be an okay ending I guess.
Okay hell no because I still don't know what the deal between Linnea and Rawder is!
Its a cool story.
Any chance at completion?
11/1/2015 c15 sunny
This is actually such an underrated story based on the number of reviews it has. Should have 1000 because it's definitely up there. Hope you finish it!
This is actually such an underrated story based on the number of reviews it has. Should have 1000 because it's definitely up there. Hope you finish it!
7/6/2014 c1 6cityflux
I know it's been forever since you updated (and I highly doubt you'll even see this...) but I just want to say that this story is really one of the best I've read. I thought the first couple of chapters were a little shaky and I did want to smack Cadence for her unwavering romantic idealism, but these characters really grew on me.
I love how all of them have their distinctive personalities, even minor ones like Jules and Simone and Izza. Cadence and Seb are wonderful together but I'm presuming they've got to go through a couple more hurdles before getting a happy ending (assuming they do!). If you ever manage to update again, even just a small one, I'd love to find out what happens to Cadence and Seb.
6cityfluxI know it's been forever since you updated (and I highly doubt you'll even see this...) but I just want to say that this story is really one of the best I've read. I thought the first couple of chapters were a little shaky and I did want to smack Cadence for her unwavering romantic idealism, but these characters really grew on me.
I love how all of them have their distinctive personalities, even minor ones like Jules and Simone and Izza. Cadence and Seb are wonderful together but I'm presuming they've got to go through a couple more hurdles before getting a happy ending (assuming they do!). If you ever manage to update again, even just a small one, I'd love to find out what happens to Cadence and Seb.
3/21/2013 c15 Please
UPDATE
:'(
UPDATE
:'(
10/3/2012 c15 Allison
Not only is this an amazing story but you like owl city as well so that makes you awesome. Please please please update. And keep up the good work.
Not only is this an amazing story but you like owl city as well so that makes you awesome. Please please please update. And keep up the good work.
9/6/2012 c15 ColourCascade
Yeah so I see you haven't updated in ages but I really think you should continue this story cos its actually really good :) I really like it and I'd love to read more
Yeah so I see you haven't updated in ages but I really think you should continue this story cos its actually really good :) I really like it and I'd love to read more
7/27/2012 c15 Guest
It's such a pity that you haven't updated. This story is amazing.
It's such a pity that you haven't updated. This story is amazing.
7/12/2012 c15 Preposterous
Please update soon!
Actually, even if the story ends here, it would be a perfect ending.
Please update soon!
Actually, even if the story ends here, it would be a perfect ending.